
12/10/2009 c2 CM
That was quite sweet but I found Zuko and Mai to be a little out of charater. But good effort.
That was quite sweet but I found Zuko and Mai to be a little out of charater. But good effort.
11/22/2009 c2 gloomy maiko lover
aww just loved both chapter's hope you write more chapter's so you did a great,awsome job. xD xD
aww just loved both chapter's hope you write more chapter's so you did a great,awsome job. xD xD
11/19/2009 c2 4everMaiko
Ahh this is so sweet, romantic, lovely and sweet and i LOVE it ^^ Really awesome job, hope you will write more !
Ahh this is so sweet, romantic, lovely and sweet and i LOVE it ^^ Really awesome job, hope you will write more !
11/18/2009 c2
5Kimjuni2
Ahh I L O V E IT ^^ How he proposed and everything it was so romantic and sweet and I hope you will write more :D
Awesome job

Ahh I L O V E IT ^^ How he proposed and everything it was so romantic and sweet and I hope you will write more :D
Awesome job
11/16/2009 c1 Kimjuni2
Omg, I L O V E I T ^ ^ You write them so sweet :D i really love this! Awesome job
Omg, I L O V E I T ^ ^ You write them so sweet :D i really love this! Awesome job
11/15/2009 c1 SarySoda
As soon as I read this I was like is this person a Twilight fan? Then I read your name and was like yup lol nice story
As soon as I read this I was like is this person a Twilight fan? Then I read your name and was like yup lol nice story