for I Don't Wanna be in Love2/25/2024 c1 
2Wren210
nice to see that you are the clumsy one around here because tell me if Kagome was such a klutz how on earth is it that she is still alive she lives at a shrine with all the STONE stairs and yet she hasn't fell down them and broken her neck a million times already so yeah she trips once and every one calls her clumsy that trip or fall actually saved her life without it InuYasha would have killed her. so yeah the only clumsy one around here would be you the writer for making such a horrid mistake
2Wren210nice to see that you are the clumsy one around here because tell me if Kagome was such a klutz how on earth is it that she is still alive she lives at a shrine with all the STONE stairs and yet she hasn't fell down them and broken her neck a million times already so yeah she trips once and every one calls her clumsy that trip or fall actually saved her life without it InuYasha would have killed her. so yeah the only clumsy one around here would be you the writer for making such a horrid mistake
6/17/2021 c1 TaxLady0415
This is a perfect multi-faceted gem of a story, one that leaves intriguing hints for the reader to imagine what happens next.
This is a perfect multi-faceted gem of a story, one that leaves intriguing hints for the reader to imagine what happens next.
8/30/2011 c1 Thinker-Tinker
Awesome songfic! completely entranced in the story! I say if you have a few more idead then let your imagination lead the way! you could definately turn this one into a lot more!
Awesome songfic! completely entranced in the story! I say if you have a few more idead then let your imagination lead the way! you could definately turn this one into a lot more!
4/15/2011 c1 4Wysteria Starfyre
I really like this in comparison to most "song-fics". I like how you used the lyrics to switch point of view or scenes. Excellent job. I hope to see more from you in the future.
4Wysteria StarfyreI really like this in comparison to most "song-fics". I like how you used the lyrics to switch point of view or scenes. Excellent job. I hope to see more from you in the future.
9/27/2010 c1 Lauramichca
I don't know... I normally am at least curious enough to ask for more, but I am not sure that I want to see you mess with the perfect end bit. (Oh who am I kidding, if you changed your mind and added more I would still be delighted.)
Thanks for posting this!
I don't know... I normally am at least curious enough to ask for more, but I am not sure that I want to see you mess with the perfect end bit. (Oh who am I kidding, if you changed your mind and added more I would still be delighted.)
Thanks for posting this!
5/16/2010 c1 Striving For Courage
Wow...I love how you interpreted dance into this fic and i love how the way they danced represented their personalities...
I love the ending, it gives the reader enough to be pleased yet leaves it at a cliffhanger.
Overall a wonderful piece that is now a favourite of mine :D
Good Job.
xStriving in Couragex
Wow...I love how you interpreted dance into this fic and i love how the way they danced represented their personalities...
I love the ending, it gives the reader enough to be pleased yet leaves it at a cliffhanger.
Overall a wonderful piece that is now a favourite of mine :D
Good Job.
xStriving in Couragex
11/17/2009 c1 6Uncoloured186
This was a lovely shot. I enjoyed reading it and would like to read more about it. Another chapter maybe, to end the story properly. Anyway, thanks for sharing this.
Keep writing! XD
6Uncoloured186This was a lovely shot. I enjoyed reading it and would like to read more about it. Another chapter maybe, to end the story properly. Anyway, thanks for sharing this.
Keep writing! XD