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11/24/2009 c6 DreamScheme
Nice chapter hope everything works out for them. Update soon! =)
11/24/2009 c5 DreamScheme
Wow this was a good chap! This story is just getting better by the chapter! =)
11/24/2009 c6 NLpretzel
This was reali good! U mudt think im really wierd cos i luv ur stories so much lol can't wait for the next one :D
11/22/2009 c5 4unbrroken
O_O wow, with the cliffhanger. MORE, MORE, MORE! XD
11/21/2009 c1 hohey
Right now she's probably slow dancing

With a bleached-blond punk

And he's probably getting frisky

Right now, she's probably buying

Him some fruity little drink

'Cause he can't shoot whiskey

Right now, she's probably up behind her

With a pool stick

Showing him how to shoot a combo

And she don't know

I dug my key into the side

Of her pretty little souped-up 4 wheel drive

Carved my name into her leather seat

I took a Louisville slugger to both head lights

Slashed a hole in all 4 tires

And maybe next time she'll think before he cheats

Right now, he's probably up singing some

White-trash version of Chuck Berry karaoke

Right now, he's probably saying, "I'm drunk"

And she's a thinking that he's gonna get lucky

Right now, she's probably dabbing on 3 dollars

Worth of that bathroom Polo

Oh and she don't know

That I dug my key into the side

Of her pretty little souped-up 4 wheel drive

Carved my name into her leather seat

I took a Louisville slugger to both head lights

Slashed a hole in all 4 tires

And maybe next time he'll think before she cheats

I might've saved a little trouble for the next boy

'Cause the next time that she cheats

Oh, you know it won't be on me!

No, not on me

'Cause I dug my key into the side

Of her pretty little souped-up 4 wheel drive

Carved my name into her leather seat

I took a Louisville slugger to both head lights

Slashed a hole in all 4 tires

Maybe next time he'll think before she cheats

Oh, maybe next time he'll think before she cheats

Oh, before she cheats

Oh
11/21/2009 c3 3Mystic KiBender
O_O Aww poor Oliver guess he dosen't get either of them lol very nice can't wait for the next bit
11/20/2009 c3 hartbig
What a cliffhanger! I knew something was gonna happen when i read that oliver was in the bushes
11/19/2009 c1 1Princess-Lily-Malfoy
wow so far this chapter is really really good
11/18/2009 c1 22xjadedjoy
Aw! This is cute. I can't wait to read more. :]

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