
2/20/2010 c2
30Yami's Aibou
Its three am and Im in my bed reading this on my itouch and i got to the last line and i couldnt control my laughter! Omg! But im not supposed to be on now so i was laughing silentl so hard for so long my mom thought i was having a seizure. :) but seriously, i love this. I just finished chekov cant lie (which was awesomeness btw) and im wishin there was more of operative constructive love!
And in an only slightly related note i saw on your profile that you are in possession of a t'hy'la! Me too! =D

Its three am and Im in my bed reading this on my itouch and i got to the last line and i couldnt control my laughter! Omg! But im not supposed to be on now so i was laughing silentl so hard for so long my mom thought i was having a seizure. :) but seriously, i love this. I just finished chekov cant lie (which was awesomeness btw) and im wishin there was more of operative constructive love!
And in an only slightly related note i saw on your profile that you are in possession of a t'hy'la! Me too! =D
2/19/2010 c2
209SeverusPotterSnape
short... that chapter was weird... lol. It was cute but the fight wouldn't be like that. Urg, that was unlike kirk. But still, it wasn't a bad chapter...just a bit childish.
however, i would luv to see what happens next with sulu and chekov. please update soon.

short... that chapter was weird... lol. It was cute but the fight wouldn't be like that. Urg, that was unlike kirk. But still, it wasn't a bad chapter...just a bit childish.
however, i would luv to see what happens next with sulu and chekov. please update soon.
2/19/2010 c2
59MirrorFlower and DarkWind
Jim you crack me up lol i loved it perfect job it was just amazing i cant wait for more and i loved your Chekov! He was fine dont let anyone tell you he wasnt

Jim you crack me up lol i loved it perfect job it was just amazing i cant wait for more and i loved your Chekov! He was fine dont let anyone tell you he wasnt
12/29/2009 c1
2NekoTenshiKoi
AH! I like it! I read the other that this is the sequel to already obviously. :) its AWESOME! please post the next chapter ASAP!

AH! I like it! I read the other that this is the sequel to already obviously. :) its AWESOME! please post the next chapter ASAP!
12/22/2009 c1
19bulletproofweeks
You're last story was fantastic and this one is already off to a great start! I love sequels and I'm glad you started this story right from where the last story ended. Then I don't miss a single moment of their blossoming relationship!
Please update soon. I can't wait.

You're last story was fantastic and this one is already off to a great start! I love sequels and I'm glad you started this story right from where the last story ended. Then I don't miss a single moment of their blossoming relationship!
Please update soon. I can't wait.
12/6/2009 c1 ShatFat
O, drool! More, please! I love Kirk's first line. Nice balance of drama and humor.
O, drool! More, please! I love Kirk's first line. Nice balance of drama and humor.
12/6/2009 c1 Rusty-Spotted Cat
Oh, I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter! I can't wait for Chekov and Sulu to get together too!
Oh, I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter! I can't wait for Chekov and Sulu to get together too!
11/30/2009 c1
13QuinaLee
I think I love you.
Okay, well maybe not YOU, but your writing at least. I've squealed at least 764234345921375 times, and that's a lot coming from a girl that's feeling like absolute shit right now...damn colds :(
But, yeah. You're amazing. Keep up the good work ;)
-Quina 3

I think I love you.
Okay, well maybe not YOU, but your writing at least. I've squealed at least 764234345921375 times, and that's a lot coming from a girl that's feeling like absolute shit right now...damn colds :(
But, yeah. You're amazing. Keep up the good work ;)
-Quina 3
11/22/2009 c1
37demonlifehealer
Lol, good start to the sequel! Spock is so smart! He had already planned everything but I want to see Chekov get some lovin'! Please update soon!

Lol, good start to the sequel! Spock is so smart! He had already planned everything but I want to see Chekov get some lovin'! Please update soon!
11/22/2009 c1
209SeverusPotterSnape
its good so far and a little OC of Spock though. However, I do hope that things between Sulu and Chekov are around this time for their own romantic relationship.
Teehee, I too also luv the pairing of Uhura/Scotty. They're in my next story that I'm doing on my USB drive.
please update soon.

its good so far and a little OC of Spock though. However, I do hope that things between Sulu and Chekov are around this time for their own romantic relationship.
Teehee, I too also luv the pairing of Uhura/Scotty. They're in my next story that I'm doing on my USB drive.
please update soon.
11/22/2009 c1
4karmapolice28
'you have had some comical wardrobe malfunctions today Jim.'
*blushes* '...shut up Spock!'
lol that was so girly of kirk 3
moar plz

'you have had some comical wardrobe malfunctions today Jim.'
*blushes* '...shut up Spock!'
lol that was so girly of kirk 3
moar plz
11/21/2009 c1 kingdomhearts222
Poor Kirk. Him and clothes don't go together when dealing with Spock. :D They are so cute together and Kirk is so funny with his overreacting.
Poor Kirk. Him and clothes don't go together when dealing with Spock. :D They are so cute together and Kirk is so funny with his overreacting.