for Midwinter11/28/2009 c1 dolphindancer
hey emily!
it's joanna
lol
nice
though i must say u shouldn't waste ur time writing if u have homework
which i know u did
:P
but still
it was a good fic
u had a couple typos, just so u know
but that's ok :)
good job
i'm proud of u
luv u!
3
hey emily!
it's joanna
lol
nice
though i must say u shouldn't waste ur time writing if u have homework
which i know u did
:P
but still
it was a good fic
u had a couple typos, just so u know
but that's ok :)
good job
i'm proud of u
luv u!
3
11/25/2009 c1 
10omgluvr24
I love it, just one thing: How could you leave me to my own imagination of the explanation to Alanna?
10omgluvr24I love it, just one thing: How could you leave me to my own imagination of the explanation to Alanna?
11/22/2009 c1 61Sylvanius
I liked this, I especially loved that you incorporated the canon part where she was hunted; it was a really nice touch. Poor Daine that he thought it was only as friends...:( Sucky when that happens...the only bit of advice I have is to maybe flesh out some of the scenes just a tad more...that would really bring it together. Good job though! If we do another competition I really hope you participate in that one as well!
61SylvaniusI liked this, I especially loved that you incorporated the canon part where she was hunted; it was a really nice touch. Poor Daine that he thought it was only as friends...:( Sucky when that happens...the only bit of advice I have is to maybe flesh out some of the scenes just a tad more...that would really bring it together. Good job though! If we do another competition I really hope you participate in that one as well!