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9/14/2011 c7 32LittleLizzieZentara
Castle's wall comment was awesome.
9/14/2011 c8 LittleLizzieZentara
LOL This chapter was just plain fun. I cracked up at Castle's comment about the dead moving. And I love the way he imagined he was James Bond.
9/14/2011 c7 5KatheeHDS
Re-Read! ^^ Feels as awesome as the first time, aaah... It sure brings back memories... When I was just getting started in Fanfiction.net...

I hope you won't leave us waiting for another year... Maybe half of it, but a whole? My, my... I don't think I could resist...

Well, who am i kidding? maybe i'd be able to cope with, and it'd be fun to re-read the whole story once again, as i've done today...

Keep it up!
9/14/2011 c8 KatheeHDS
Loong time no see!

You can be fairly happy, i've read this two new chaps and now i'm starting all story anew because I've almost forgotten how it went... I do remember chapter 6, though, but can't say the same about chaps 1-5... So... Re-read time!

Thank you for everything ^^
7/9/2011 c6 3Jajibuba
Continue? Great story keep going plz!
1/17/2011 c6 31Alexis Dawn
I loved this! Please write more now!
9/4/2010 c5 11Jayce Gish
Firt, the criicism: "elevator", not lift; "hood", not bonnet. And a "carpark" is either a parking lot or a garage (but, as a rule, due to lack of any parking spaces in NYC, the car are usually just double-parked outside of the front entrance to the precinct).

American-speak, not English-English. (Use "torch" instead of "flashlight", and I'll be at your front door throwing a hissy fit!)

And one medical point: In order for Lanie to have determined that the victim had a high blood alcohol level, that would need to be determined by a blood test (drawing the blood and the labs), and that statement could not be made on the preliminary inspection of the body. Add in an empty flask or small bottle in a coat pocket, and would be a little more accurate. Lanie makes enough mistakes on the series: let's go for a little more scientific accuracy in the stories (Sorry, I work for a coroner. . .).

Now for the good stuff: I really like the tone, especially with Beckett. She does seem a little like a kindergarten teacher trying to keep the unruly kids in line, but they are the detectives with far too much time on their hands. I did like the final Ryan snowball throw. Interested to see where you are taking this to next.
7/29/2010 c5 Krysteenaful
thats so cool castle101
7/25/2010 c5 Beckett NYPD
Wonder what Montgomery and Beckett will have to say about this.
7/8/2010 c4 Krysteenaful
oh nooooooo... i cant wait to read the next chapter! please upload soon!
7/8/2010 c4 5KatheeHDS
O_O i was so focused in the snowball thing that i forgot of the voice shouting for help!

i was waiting for this chap to be released... so bad that now i'll have to wait several days till the next post...

im waitin!
5/17/2010 c3 5TheKingdomofWaffles
Haha, I like the part where someone (I don't remember who) nabbed Beckett in the head. Or maybe my imagination is acting up, wouldn't be the first time. Great story! Keep writing! -Emma
5/17/2010 c3 Lauz
:D Wow! I love it! give us more! :)

tis pre spesh luv!
5/17/2010 c3 ClaireBear4Ever
OMG im laughing so hard at this, it was hilarious. You have to write more sooner because its amazing and i love to laugh and i need it to get through the last 2 weeks of school!
5/17/2010 c3 2xXx ShadowCat xXx
I love it! I can imagine the characters saying these things. Awesome.

New Castle tonight!
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