for Where I Belong8/25/2010 c6 
10hurricane1714
She'll have nothing to do with the baby. Riiiiiiiiiiiight.
The scene with her and Dawson was amazing. Just so heartfelt. I now ship Celeste/Dawson.
Question: Is Celeste going to live at the Institute, to better hide the baby?
Can't wait for the next chapter!
10hurricane1714She'll have nothing to do with the baby. Riiiiiiiiiiiight.
The scene with her and Dawson was amazing. Just so heartfelt. I now ship Celeste/Dawson.
Question: Is Celeste going to live at the Institute, to better hide the baby?
Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/25/2010 c5 hurricane1714
Okay, feel like a dumb-butt for not seeing it coming, so you get "Awesome Writer" points. But, how does the baby formulate thoughts? And wouldn't the doctors require her to take pregnancy test? Ah well. And didn't you say there was more than on voice? Twins maybe?
So, what time is the story set? After X3?
One critique, I felt that the X-Men, especially Logan's introduction, was a little abrupt. That is all.
Okay, feel like a dumb-butt for not seeing it coming, so you get "Awesome Writer" points. But, how does the baby formulate thoughts? And wouldn't the doctors require her to take pregnancy test? Ah well. And didn't you say there was more than on voice? Twins maybe?
So, what time is the story set? After X3?
One critique, I felt that the X-Men, especially Logan's introduction, was a little abrupt. That is all.
8/25/2010 c4 hurricane1714
Pretty interesting charater development here. I'm glad to see Cel and her father interact. It was also cool to see her and Dawson talk. Good foundation for the plot.
Pretty interesting charater development here. I'm glad to see Cel and her father interact. It was also cool to see her and Dawson talk. Good foundation for the plot.
8/25/2010 c3 hurricane1714
To tell the truth, the therapy seemed a little short. In my experience, therapy sessions last longer, usually about an hour.
Yay! Emma Frost! I kinda want to be her when I grow up! She seemed a bit OOC if you are going by the comics. A little too informal. BUT you are writing in the movie-verse. You don't have to go by the comics.
I hope we get to hear more about relationship between Celeste and her parents.
To tell the truth, the therapy seemed a little short. In my experience, therapy sessions last longer, usually about an hour.
Yay! Emma Frost! I kinda want to be her when I grow up! She seemed a bit OOC if you are going by the comics. A little too informal. BUT you are writing in the movie-verse. You don't have to go by the comics.
I hope we get to hear more about relationship between Celeste and her parents.
8/25/2010 c2 hurricane1714
Class is about to start, so I gotta be quick. You're fleshing out your OC well. Her life is really sucking right now. Good attention grabbing opening.
Class is about to start, so I gotta be quick. You're fleshing out your OC well. Her life is really sucking right now. Good attention grabbing opening.
8/25/2010 c1 hurricane1714
You've got some good ideas. I can't wait to see where Celeste fits in the Marvel Universe. The description of The Club was very vivid. I haven't actually been to a club, but I've been to dances, and your description reminded me of them.
You've got some good ideas. I can't wait to see where Celeste fits in the Marvel Universe. The description of The Club was very vivid. I haven't actually been to a club, but I've been to dances, and your description reminded me of them.
8/24/2010 c6 14abandoned accont
i like this story. i understand writing moral delemas are hard, so good job on making it bleavible.
14abandoned acconti like this story. i understand writing moral delemas are hard, so good job on making it bleavible.
3/5/2010 c5 5Bookits
Oh dang! I wonder how her mother dearest is going to take this. This is a cool story, please write more soon!
5BookitsOh dang! I wonder how her mother dearest is going to take this. This is a cool story, please write more soon!
3/5/2010 c5 19BornToBeAWitch1989
I like this this is good. The chapter is good and a great twist there with her becoming pregnant. you should really continue. i like it
19BornToBeAWitch1989I like this this is good. The chapter is good and a great twist there with her becoming pregnant. you should really continue. i like it
1/23/2010 c5 11Wordspin
Nice twist. Celeste's pregnant and the baby's a mutant. I like the way you're handling the plot.
11WordspinNice twist. Celeste's pregnant and the baby's a mutant. I like the way you're handling the plot.
12/18/2009 c4 1Stefffles
I really like this story. Keep up the great writing, and update soon!
I can't wait to find out what happens next (:
1SteffflesI really like this story. Keep up the great writing, and update soon!
I can't wait to find out what happens next (:
12/17/2009 c4 11Wordspin
I didn't think the pace was fast; like you yourself said, it would be repeating what's already written if you expanded on it.
11WordspinI didn't think the pace was fast; like you yourself said, it would be repeating what's already written if you expanded on it.
12/13/2009 c3 Wordspin
This story should really get more reviews, it's interesting. Simple, but that's what makes it so nice. Simplicity is often more appealing than complex things.
Again, good chapter and descriptions!
This story should really get more reviews, it's interesting. Simple, but that's what makes it so nice. Simplicity is often more appealing than complex things.
Again, good chapter and descriptions!
12/12/2009 c2 Wordspin
Nice chapter, simple and realistic. I especially liked the way you described Dawson - he is such a sweet character.
Keep it going!
Certh
Nice chapter, simple and realistic. I especially liked the way you described Dawson - he is such a sweet character.
Keep it going!
Certh