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8/24/2019 c1 Amber
THIS IS AMAZING
9/4/2018 c1 Guest
DISGUSTING you weirdo
12/7/2014 c1 Bob
nice
3/23/2013 c1 bb
not the best
4/28/2011 c1 Guest
It has the potentual to be a yummy smut, but your grammar, no offense, is rather lacking. Especially in speech- I advise you revise over the correct way to write people talking.

Also, break down the long paragraphs! Smaller paragraphs are always easier to read and much neater than a huge, jumbled piece of text.

No offense intented with any of this :)Work on it, and write awayyy!
11/28/2009 c1 54nairiefairie
hello there. i thought i'd check out what you've done here ;) i take it you are a fi and homer fan then? ;)i like that it was fi who went to him because homer would have never grown the balls to go to her. i liked that she was nerveous but i think if it was her first time that it should have been at least a bit painful it can be pleasureable but still. i guess i am a bit old fashion that way ;) anyway over all i liked it. ;)nice job.

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