for When Shadows Rise8/20/2015 c6 Williams Damas
buenas en que parte aparece Ranma?
good, Ranma appears that part?
buenas en que parte aparece Ranma?
good, Ranma appears that part?
12/11/2009 c14 
3Gelionlegends
this is an interesting story i will give you that but like Falkun who i agree with this has very little ranma at all so i think you should put this into the sailor moon section and not in the ranma.
that and i noticed that you have uptil chapter 14 have been using meat loaf song titles as the titles for you chapters.
why well like i said nearly all of this is about your main character who i notice has you author name and deals with the sailor scouts and makes a few comments about ranma, well really just hints to him.
that and this story should go up from a T rating to an M with both the suggestion of rape but also the scene of torture done to the main character.
though that scene looked very familier to me the one with the aki giving her water which irritated me for some reason.
heck i think putting this in the sailor moon section and upping the rating may get you more reviews as everything for the reason why is above that and it just seems to be in the wrong place.
that and ranma is going to be very weak if not feeble when compared to the scouts and shadows and i my option is not going to be able to put up much of a fight or anything.
as you have overpowered the shadows and their minions and traitors with the good guys barely gaining any power at all. unless you are going to have ranma suddenly come from being the last fiddle to being equal to the shadow master though it all seems like the good guys are jut going to suddenly gain the power at the very last and win.
this story isn't something i would put in my alerts or in my favorites.
if i carry on anymore i'll just endup redoing what i have already stated.
3Gelionlegendsthis is an interesting story i will give you that but like Falkun who i agree with this has very little ranma at all so i think you should put this into the sailor moon section and not in the ranma.
that and i noticed that you have uptil chapter 14 have been using meat loaf song titles as the titles for you chapters.
why well like i said nearly all of this is about your main character who i notice has you author name and deals with the sailor scouts and makes a few comments about ranma, well really just hints to him.
that and this story should go up from a T rating to an M with both the suggestion of rape but also the scene of torture done to the main character.
though that scene looked very familier to me the one with the aki giving her water which irritated me for some reason.
heck i think putting this in the sailor moon section and upping the rating may get you more reviews as everything for the reason why is above that and it just seems to be in the wrong place.
that and ranma is going to be very weak if not feeble when compared to the scouts and shadows and i my option is not going to be able to put up much of a fight or anything.
as you have overpowered the shadows and their minions and traitors with the good guys barely gaining any power at all. unless you are going to have ranma suddenly come from being the last fiddle to being equal to the shadow master though it all seems like the good guys are jut going to suddenly gain the power at the very last and win.
this story isn't something i would put in my alerts or in my favorites.
if i carry on anymore i'll just endup redoing what i have already stated.
12/9/2009 c8 uglybiker
Interesting story. Interesting plot with good pacing. All I would suggest is to spend a little more time proofreading before you post. I'm seeing quite a few spelling flubs.
Notice that in the Chapter Navigation Bar, Chapter 8 is titled 'Good Girls go to Heave'.
I was not aware that Sailor Moon was a supermodel. ;-)
Interesting story. Interesting plot with good pacing. All I would suggest is to spend a little more time proofreading before you post. I'm seeing quite a few spelling flubs.
Notice that in the Chapter Navigation Bar, Chapter 8 is titled 'Good Girls go to Heave'.
I was not aware that Sailor Moon was a supermodel. ;-)
12/7/2009 c1 Lythrana
um... so i can immediately see the sailormoon part of the cross, but i'm 5 chapters in and no Ranma... just wondering, where is the ramna part of this sailormoon ranma crossover
um... so i can immediately see the sailormoon part of the cross, but i'm 5 chapters in and no Ranma... just wondering, where is the ramna part of this sailormoon ranma crossover