for A Garment of Brightness3/16 c86 Rue1921
A beautiful and wild ride. Your symbolism and poetry had me captivated on the end of my seat until the end. I was so sure that Edward and his family were truly moved on, ghosts to go with your theme of spiritualism. Thank you for finishing this beautiful story and for all of its unexpected twists and turns. Can't wait to read again.
A beautiful and wild ride. Your symbolism and poetry had me captivated on the end of my seat until the end. I was so sure that Edward and his family were truly moved on, ghosts to go with your theme of spiritualism. Thank you for finishing this beautiful story and for all of its unexpected twists and turns. Can't wait to read again.
1/24 c86 Guest
86 pages of fucking nonsense
86 pages of fucking nonsense
12/22/2024 c86 
1drboggs
Oooooh, a mysterious and beautiful fairytale, the proper kind, with blood and tragedy and ancient myths. I devoured this, and my eyes are so bleary, but this was so touching to read. I loved how you wrote Emmett's voice - that last paragraph of his point of view was poetry. I solemnly salute the level of detail in this. Amazing. Thank you.
1drboggsOooooh, a mysterious and beautiful fairytale, the proper kind, with blood and tragedy and ancient myths. I devoured this, and my eyes are so bleary, but this was so touching to read. I loved how you wrote Emmett's voice - that last paragraph of his point of view was poetry. I solemnly salute the level of detail in this. Amazing. Thank you.
11/17/2024 c86 Allear
Wow! I'm so impressed that you managed to finish this! I felt so sorry for Bella, it was a tough read. I still don't understand the quilt thing, and I still think that Emmett is a douchebag. And the Quileutes. They didn't save her, that was a goddam assault. Anyway, thank you very much! Also, there's something wrong with my ff app. I can't reply to PMs, sorry for that. But I appreciate that you took the time!
Wow! I'm so impressed that you managed to finish this! I felt so sorry for Bella, it was a tough read. I still don't understand the quilt thing, and I still think that Emmett is a douchebag. And the Quileutes. They didn't save her, that was a goddam assault. Anyway, thank you very much! Also, there's something wrong with my ff app. I can't reply to PMs, sorry for that. But I appreciate that you took the time!
11/17/2024 c41 Allear
Ah, ok. Suits me right, I should know better than to comment before the end of the chapter (but the suspense was excruciating!). Still, I don't see how this changes my perception of Rosalie and Emmett. Maybe Alice knew, but there's no way that the other two would have been able to hide the true outcome from Edward's mind-reading. Those two are still on my crap-list.
Ah, ok. Suits me right, I should know better than to comment before the end of the chapter (but the suspense was excruciating!). Still, I don't see how this changes my perception of Rosalie and Emmett. Maybe Alice knew, but there's no way that the other two would have been able to hide the true outcome from Edward's mind-reading. Those two are still on my crap-list.
11/17/2024 c40 Allear
Did they create a false memory to keep Bella safe from the Volturis? Is that what happened? Help!
Did they create a false memory to keep Bella safe from the Volturis? Is that what happened? Help!
11/17/2024 c40 Allear
I feel utterly stupid, I didn't understand at all what happened in the last chapter. Why didn't he kill Bella? And why did the others restrain him? Did Alice know that he wouldn't go through with it? Was it Jasper by the church? The only thing I understand is that both Rosalie and Emmett seem to be horrible beings. Especially Emmett. At least Rosalie is driven by a sense of righteousness (as bizarre as it is). But Emmett just doesn't care. He's a selfish and stupid monster. I have a humbling suspicion that this fic is way over my head. I'm not enough mentally equipped to keep up. Ah, well. I'm going to keep on reading, though.
I feel utterly stupid, I didn't understand at all what happened in the last chapter. Why didn't he kill Bella? And why did the others restrain him? Did Alice know that he wouldn't go through with it? Was it Jasper by the church? The only thing I understand is that both Rosalie and Emmett seem to be horrible beings. Especially Emmett. At least Rosalie is driven by a sense of righteousness (as bizarre as it is). But Emmett just doesn't care. He's a selfish and stupid monster. I have a humbling suspicion that this fic is way over my head. I'm not enough mentally equipped to keep up. Ah, well. I'm going to keep on reading, though.
11/4/2024 c16 Guest
Their lives are short. Not is.
Their lives are short. Not is.
9/30/2024 c86 ClaceLover08
i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Bella & Edward together
i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Bella & Edward together
8/9/2024 c86 lizf22
Thank you and congratulations on finishing this beautiful story. going to read it top to bottom all over again! xoxo
Thank you and congratulations on finishing this beautiful story. going to read it top to bottom all over again! xoxo
7/19/2024 c86 gotitbad
I know this is a older story. I really enjoyed reading it though I just came across it and it was very good.
I know this is a older story. I really enjoyed reading it though I just came across it and it was very good.