for You'll Be Loved2/28/2011 c1 
2Rainmy
I liked your writing,specially the poems althought I'm not into poetry at all,and how you told the things athayt happen in the past and how kaouru sensed them,the only thing I'm not happy with was kaoru saying ryo was real while the mias weren't,but it isn't your fault since he doesn't talk that much in the game,thought in the novels he makes it clear he doesn't care if the one he loves is human,an NPC,male,female,cat,etc...meaning he can't be describe as somethingsexual either,since that's not posible in the world,I'd call him a...no idea,but anyway for me that gave him more credit that liking him simply for his looks and because he gave some shonen ai element(even if one sided)to a game full of battles and females,even if having a virtaul lover that's a cat is unhealthy :P
I hope you don't get angry with me pointing that,cause I liked your fic,but I hightly sugest you read the novels,not just endrance,you'll learnt about how everyone feels and real life info.
2RainmyI liked your writing,specially the poems althought I'm not into poetry at all,and how you told the things athayt happen in the past and how kaouru sensed them,the only thing I'm not happy with was kaoru saying ryo was real while the mias weren't,but it isn't your fault since he doesn't talk that much in the game,thought in the novels he makes it clear he doesn't care if the one he loves is human,an NPC,male,female,cat,etc...meaning he can't be describe as somethingsexual either,since that's not posible in the world,I'd call him a...no idea,but anyway for me that gave him more credit that liking him simply for his looks and because he gave some shonen ai element(even if one sided)to a game full of battles and females,even if having a virtaul lover that's a cat is unhealthy :P
I hope you don't get angry with me pointing that,cause I liked your fic,but I hightly sugest you read the novels,not just endrance,you'll learnt about how everyone feels and real life info.
2/16/2011 c1 3UndineAlice
Adorable～ I absolutely love the way you wrote Kaoru and Ryou, and this story was wonderful.
-UndineAlice
3UndineAliceAdorable～ I absolutely love the way you wrote Kaoru and Ryou, and this story was wonderful.
-UndineAlice