for Coincidence7/8/2010 c1 TeeniexTinyxTiger
your writing is OK but i just couldn't stomach the idea of a guy going to school and having miyuki falling all over the guy and he sounds a little mary-sueish to me ...
your writing is OK but i just couldn't stomach the idea of a guy going to school and having miyuki falling all over the guy and he sounds a little mary-sueish to me ...
5/27/2010 c2 
7cartoonpsycho888999
uhhh...I'm assuming that English isn't your first language, and under that assumption, I'm going to let the extreme amount of grammar errors go.
HOWEVER,If you're going to turn this into a mary-sue/self insert story containing a thinly veiled effigy of yourself being the object of Miyuki's adorations, you should honestly quit writing this, as there is nothing more laughable and idiotic than a serious self insert story containing a male mary sue being so zOmGaWeSoME that he turns one of the main LESBIAN characters straight.
7cartoonpsycho888999uhhh...I'm assuming that English isn't your first language, and under that assumption, I'm going to let the extreme amount of grammar errors go.
HOWEVER,If you're going to turn this into a mary-sue/self insert story containing a thinly veiled effigy of yourself being the object of Miyuki's adorations, you should honestly quit writing this, as there is nothing more laughable and idiotic than a serious self insert story containing a male mary sue being so zOmGaWeSoME that he turns one of the main LESBIAN characters straight.
5/6/2010 c1 3Wafarasu
Awesome why to start, truely something to evolve into greater lengths, update! Ja ne!
-Arekushisu 089
3WafarasuAwesome why to start, truely something to evolve into greater lengths, update! Ja ne!
-Arekushisu 089
12/28/2009 c1 daitrang
interesting.You should continue
interesting.You should continue
11/29/2009 c1 elle
good chapter!
good chapter!