for Pride Before the Fall10/24/2015 c10 
1OtakuGirl568
Really amazing story! I love the drama and the way you used each of their characters!
1OtakuGirl568Really amazing story! I love the drama and the way you used each of their characters!
6/5/2014 c10 Jazzybella
Damn. Double damn. Still have chills. To be honest, Kira got what was coming to him. He knew of Yumi's personality. This was truly well crafted. So much insight to my favourite pairing. You are a wordsmith. Bravo!
Damn. Double damn. Still have chills. To be honest, Kira got what was coming to him. He knew of Yumi's personality. This was truly well crafted. So much insight to my favourite pairing. You are a wordsmith. Bravo!
11/22/2013 c10 15X Mika-Chan X
Wow... I was definitely not expecting that ending. I thought he would leave him on the brink of death or low his confidence enough to commit suicide. Either way I absolutely loved this story! D
15X Mika-Chan XWow... I was definitely not expecting that ending. I thought he would leave him on the brink of death or low his confidence enough to commit suicide. Either way I absolutely loved this story! D
11/17/2012 c10 narutonarutolove
Hollows bleed a really dark colored blood, i think black. Loved this story!
Hollows bleed a really dark colored blood, i think black. Loved this story!
10/1/2012 c10 7Monotufu
What an amazing ending! I was waiting for Yumi to just go bezerk on Izuru! :P
7MonotufuWhat an amazing ending! I was waiting for Yumi to just go bezerk on Izuru! :P
9/30/2012 c10 2The Serene Dancer
Holy Crap! I am assuming that Yumichika killed Kira. Awesome story with an awesome ending. Dont know what else to say. Again great story.
2The Serene DancerHoly Crap! I am assuming that Yumichika killed Kira. Awesome story with an awesome ending. Dont know what else to say. Again great story.
4/2/2012 c10 23BigSister2
Amazing story. I love the portrayal of all the characters especially Ikkaku and Yumichika and the dialogue was perfect. Awesome work.
23BigSister2Amazing story. I love the portrayal of all the characters especially Ikkaku and Yumichika and the dialogue was perfect. Awesome work.
3/5/2012 c10 2Yuki Daviji
This is one of the best IkaYumi fanfics I have ever read! *cries* Kira!
By the way, would you consider writing a sequel or companion story to this? Like perhaps something from Ikkaku's point to view for the investigation of Kira's death? I'd love to read more! Your writing style is amazing! It's rare for me to actually feel emotion while reading but you made me!
2Yuki DavijiThis is one of the best IkaYumi fanfics I have ever read! *cries* Kira!
By the way, would you consider writing a sequel or companion story to this? Like perhaps something from Ikkaku's point to view for the investigation of Kira's death? I'd love to read more! Your writing style is amazing! It's rare for me to actually feel emotion while reading but you made me!
10/15/2011 c10 25Yami Neon Crayons
Wow love the story and definitly love the end, although i am a fan of both Yumi and Izuru i have to say that Yumi "Killing" Izuru was a very fitting ending. Nobody messes with squad 11s 5th seat without paying the price!
25Yami Neon CrayonsWow love the story and definitly love the end, although i am a fan of both Yumi and Izuru i have to say that Yumi "Killing" Izuru was a very fitting ending. Nobody messes with squad 11s 5th seat without paying the price!
5/22/2011 c10 8endingofbehan
OMG! i just love love love this story! I realy love the way how you portrayed their feelings! It was soo intense! and my heart just broke when Yumichika was ill because of Ikkaku. T_T And i just hate Kira for going in between them! My heart ached for Yumichika when he yelled at Kira saying that Ikkaku and Yumickia's relationship was ruined. *tears*
Again i just love love this amazing story!
8endingofbehanOMG! i just love love love this story! I realy love the way how you portrayed their feelings! It was soo intense! and my heart just broke when Yumichika was ill because of Ikkaku. T_T And i just hate Kira for going in between them! My heart ached for Yumichika when he yelled at Kira saying that Ikkaku and Yumickia's relationship was ruined. *tears*
Again i just love love this amazing story!
8/29/2010 c10 8Wicked Winter
XD YAY! Izuru's dead!
Quite frankly, he's always kinda creeped me out. I dunno why.
8Wicked WinterXD YAY! Izuru's dead!
Quite frankly, he's always kinda creeped me out. I dunno why.
8/21/2010 c10 20xnightmare'sxnightmarex
What an amazing story~! I enjoyed it so much that I couldnt stop reading it, it was that good! I'm sad though for Kira even though he kind was a douche but at least Yumichika and Ikkaku were able to start over. ^^ Its been awhile since I read a good Yumichika/Ikkaku and I'm glad I read this :D
20xnightmare'sxnightmarexWhat an amazing story~! I enjoyed it so much that I couldnt stop reading it, it was that good! I'm sad though for Kira even though he kind was a douche but at least Yumichika and Ikkaku were able to start over. ^^ Its been awhile since I read a good Yumichika/Ikkaku and I'm glad I read this :D