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2/7/2010 c1 92WayLowHalo
Ohh, I like this. Very River-esque. Nicely done.
12/9/2009 c1 43sashsweetie
Je l'aime :) Very River.
12/6/2009 c1 14GirlwithSword
Really nicely written and totally Rivers head. Sweet and a little scary, I like it!
12/4/2009 c1 RionaEire
Very interesting and hauntingly written. Its interesting that you say the surface scares River as much as the depths. I guess I just want her to feel content whether in the depths or on the surface, for the waters to be calm and serene so when she is deep down it isn't scary but settled and when she is on the surface for it to be a calm day without too much wind. I like your use of "down deep" in the water to convey River's situation, beyond your years you clearly beyond your years you are a chara. And lovely to hear from you and see something by you, I'm so glad I read this despite its short length. I'm favoriting it.

Riona
12/1/2009 c1 6The Evil Corkyapine
wow, that was a great ff!

perfect portrayal of river.

-T.E.C
12/1/2009 c1 636xfirefly9x
Cool! Nicely written.

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