for Rain and Kisses12/4/2009 c2 
15ConverseWithMyDress
That one paragraph was brilliant. I know it's hard to judge from just that little piece of writing but I think this story has a lot of potential, and I definitely think you should expand it.
You should definitely show what happened before the kiss.
Update soon. -Emma.
15ConverseWithMyDressThat one paragraph was brilliant. I know it's hard to judge from just that little piece of writing but I think this story has a lot of potential, and I definitely think you should expand it.
You should definitely show what happened before the kiss.
Update soon. -Emma.
12/4/2009 c2 14264734z2514
I think you should explain how it came to the kiss too! Can´t wait for it!
I think you should explain how it came to the kiss too! Can´t wait for it!