
3/16/2011 c1 Taito-kiss
Wow.. I have read this twice, and I lovee it :D
Good story, but... I wish it was longer. It seems like you want to finish it quickly, so you just skip the intro. Not bad, but I prefer longer story. Lol. Keep going !
Thank's for make this story :)
Wow.. I have read this twice, and I lovee it :D
Good story, but... I wish it was longer. It seems like you want to finish it quickly, so you just skip the intro. Not bad, but I prefer longer story. Lol. Keep going !
Thank's for make this story :)
8/2/2010 c1
34KaiserinAstraia
I think it could've been a little more descriptive, otherwise it was good tho :D

I think it could've been a little more descriptive, otherwise it was good tho :D
1/21/2010 c1 haheho
Amazing :)
I really enjoyed reading this. ^-^
It'd be awesome if you made it a multi-chap story :D
Amazing :)
I really enjoyed reading this. ^-^
It'd be awesome if you made it a multi-chap story :D
12/12/2009 c1 Namine's Aprentice
Very nice, hehehe, you were able to make Sora seem innocent yet lustful, very hard to acomplish. I wonder though... Who did Riku think was replacing him? I adore that vageness because it allows the reader to come up with hundreads of different side paairings.
Very nice, hehehe, you were able to make Sora seem innocent yet lustful, very hard to acomplish. I wonder though... Who did Riku think was replacing him? I adore that vageness because it allows the reader to come up with hundreads of different side paairings.
12/11/2009 c1 the kid
have you ever thought about doing a roxas and sora? you know, that one scene when they fight and when sora beats roxas he leaves respectfully? could you do a one shot on that, please?
have you ever thought about doing a roxas and sora? you know, that one scene when they fight and when sora beats roxas he leaves respectfully? could you do a one shot on that, please?
12/6/2009 c1 fleur breeze
WOW! I just played this game again too... I think I saw that scene... ;p
LOVED IT! Write more plz... The true feelings of Sora and Riku.
WOW! I just played this game again too... I think I saw that scene... ;p
LOVED IT! Write more plz... The true feelings of Sora and Riku.