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12/18/2009 c1 30StrykrWolf
I love how you started this. Going through the battlefield to introducing the characters.

Amazing.

What caught my attention the most was when you described the 10th division Captain, "eyes broadcasting death to all that gazed into them." Also, when you describe the 3rd division Captain fighting that was really good as well.

The aftermath was good too. How you explained what happened and its effects was a nice touch.

With an ending like yours I can't wait until the next chapter!

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