for To Be Loved6/14/2015 c36 CallMeJazz
Those hallucinating flashback memories thing are just doesn't make any sense.
Those hallucinating flashback memories thing are just doesn't make any sense.
6/14/2015 c35 CallMeJazz
Okay what edward did was just fvcking awful. cant imagine someone as young as him could do such things. but he changed right? hes totally different person now. he protect bella. but seriously even though its shocking n alot to take in, bella shouldn't have run away like that. or maybe she just need times to think, to process all the truths.
Okay what edward did was just fvcking awful. cant imagine someone as young as him could do such things. but he changed right? hes totally different person now. he protect bella. but seriously even though its shocking n alot to take in, bella shouldn't have run away like that. or maybe she just need times to think, to process all the truths.
6/13/2015 c26 CallMeJazz
Where the hell is bellas parents? seriously ppl just dont dissappear for nothing. I mean whats the reasons of them leaving? is it bcos they feel burdened? or depressed? doesn't make sense at all. There's no letter no inheritance. just poofft
Where the hell is bellas parents? seriously ppl just dont dissappear for nothing. I mean whats the reasons of them leaving? is it bcos they feel burdened? or depressed? doesn't make sense at all. There's no letter no inheritance. just poofft
5/26/2015 c47 
9sherryola
wow, really one of the best things I've read in ages. I love the way your characters grew and blossomed. It was realistic, not one day a jerk or a timid mouse,a nd the next day something new and better. It was a slow, sometimes painful progression, like real life. I loved it. I will miss these characters so much!
9sherryolawow, really one of the best things I've read in ages. I love the way your characters grew and blossomed. It was realistic, not one day a jerk or a timid mouse,a nd the next day something new and better. It was a slow, sometimes painful progression, like real life. I loved it. I will miss these characters so much!
5/26/2015 c26 sherryola
Nothing excuses what carlisle did. Poof. so he was abused. still as an adult, he chose to do what he did to his own daughter and it absolutely unforgivable. esme is an idiot.
I've been so wrapped up int he story I forgot to review other chapters. so let me say, I had to skim through the bad Jacob chapters, but I was so thankful edward saved bella. I have mixed feelings about his own violence toward Jacob, glad and disappointed all at once. lol. But at least, for now, Jacob is out of the picture and I hope he stays there.
Nothing excuses what carlisle did. Poof. so he was abused. still as an adult, he chose to do what he did to his own daughter and it absolutely unforgivable. esme is an idiot.
I've been so wrapped up int he story I forgot to review other chapters. so let me say, I had to skim through the bad Jacob chapters, but I was so thankful edward saved bella. I have mixed feelings about his own violence toward Jacob, glad and disappointed all at once. lol. But at least, for now, Jacob is out of the picture and I hope he stays there.
5/26/2015 c7 sherryola
any person who makes you lie to the people you trust and who most trust you, and if that person agrees that it's better to lie, they are absolutely no good. and the fact that she lied should tell her something. So glad I'm not an impressionable teenager anymore, or impressionable 20-something and so on. I'm afraid of what Jacob is going to do to her. He is already subtly telling her what to do and she's going along because it seems so innocuous. sigh.
any person who makes you lie to the people you trust and who most trust you, and if that person agrees that it's better to lie, they are absolutely no good. and the fact that she lied should tell her something. So glad I'm not an impressionable teenager anymore, or impressionable 20-something and so on. I'm afraid of what Jacob is going to do to her. He is already subtly telling her what to do and she's going along because it seems so innocuous. sigh.
5/26/2015 c6 sherryola
I liked Edward better in this chapter, liked him because he felt badly after beating up Tyler. Very irritated that the principal doesn't seem to mind a little bullying so Tyler gets let off the hook, as do Jacob and his gang.
I liked Edward better in this chapter, liked him because he felt badly after beating up Tyler. Very irritated that the principal doesn't seem to mind a little bullying so Tyler gets let off the hook, as do Jacob and his gang.
5/26/2015 c5 sherryola
It's so hard reading this part with Jacob. anyone should be able to tell what a scumbag he is! ah well, I was involved with my share of scum when I was young, so I guess that's why I am sensitive to it in stories. If this makes snese, I care about the characters, but I don't really like them yet. except for Rose and Emmett. I admire Emmett putting his life on hold to take care of his sister. and I love that you made Rose a kind person. I don't understand Charlie and Renee and I hope there will be some explanation of their actions down the road, so Emmett and Bella can have, if not closure which I don't believe in, but maybe explanations can put part of the hurt to rest.
It's so hard reading this part with Jacob. anyone should be able to tell what a scumbag he is! ah well, I was involved with my share of scum when I was young, so I guess that's why I am sensitive to it in stories. If this makes snese, I care about the characters, but I don't really like them yet. except for Rose and Emmett. I admire Emmett putting his life on hold to take care of his sister. and I love that you made Rose a kind person. I don't understand Charlie and Renee and I hope there will be some explanation of their actions down the road, so Emmett and Bella can have, if not closure which I don't believe in, but maybe explanations can put part of the hurt to rest.
3/3/2015 c45 meelee72
I love the way that all worked out & that it wasn't easy. They all went thru some real hardships.. & rose above.
I love Edward's career choice, even tho it wasn't his first idea, he realizes that's what he's meant to do.
Yay for Em & Rose. :) 3
- I understand Bella's boundaries w/ Charlie.
& honesty, I'm glad shes maintaining some sort of relationship w/ him.
- I feel Esme's in the best place she can be at this point, even if too far from her kids.. They'll make it.
- Well, epi next, then outtakes. Whoop!
But, then I'll have to let go... Ugh. Hardest part.
I love the way that all worked out & that it wasn't easy. They all went thru some real hardships.. & rose above.
I love Edward's career choice, even tho it wasn't his first idea, he realizes that's what he's meant to do.
Yay for Em & Rose. :) 3
- I understand Bella's boundaries w/ Charlie.
& honesty, I'm glad shes maintaining some sort of relationship w/ him.
- I feel Esme's in the best place she can be at this point, even if too far from her kids.. They'll make it.
- Well, epi next, then outtakes. Whoop!
But, then I'll have to let go... Ugh. Hardest part.
3/2/2015 c43 meelee72
Wow, that was really disappointing.. Not ur writing or ability to capture emotions... I'm so disappointed in Charlie & Renee.. I was so hoping for any other type of reason.. - shame shame shame on Charlie for abandoning his kids.- but, he was blindingly misled. Is he forgivable? He is. But not at the snap of a finger. ... The pain of his children is too great. Even tho he is also full of pain & regret, he is the parent. He left his kids, plain & simple. Deep down he didn't wanna do it, yet he did. - This will take some time & work. - but forgiveness has a way of healing the soul. None of them deserve to be miserable... I have to say that I'd like to see Charlie one day be able to enjoy his family. To bask in the joy & have a life.
Ok, so, clearly things to work on. - (Renee is a WhoreSlutSlagHagDogFaceBitch)- she's outta the question.
- Rose still doesn't know about Carlisle... :/
Wow, that was really disappointing.. Not ur writing or ability to capture emotions... I'm so disappointed in Charlie & Renee.. I was so hoping for any other type of reason.. - shame shame shame on Charlie for abandoning his kids.- but, he was blindingly misled. Is he forgivable? He is. But not at the snap of a finger. ... The pain of his children is too great. Even tho he is also full of pain & regret, he is the parent. He left his kids, plain & simple. Deep down he didn't wanna do it, yet he did. - This will take some time & work. - but forgiveness has a way of healing the soul. None of them deserve to be miserable... I have to say that I'd like to see Charlie one day be able to enjoy his family. To bask in the joy & have a life.
Ok, so, clearly things to work on. - (Renee is a WhoreSlutSlagHagDogFaceBitch)- she's outta the question.
- Rose still doesn't know about Carlisle... :/
3/2/2015 c42 meelee72
All of the song lyrics at beginnings of chapters are always well placed & appropriate, right on spot... But when I read the lyrics to Hemorrhage by Fuel, I was overwhelmed w/ chills before I even read the chapter. It was haunting.
- Hell, I'm definitely ready to hear Charlie's story, I believe it'll be a good one. (Not like "La La La, sunshine & rainbows, good)- Somehow I feel there was a purpose of protection for them leaving... Maybe. Surely, I could be wrong.
- Yes, getting near the end & I'm already bummed.- Damn, I love this Edward.. I'm like.. Totally hot for him. Lol. - U did fantastic w/ all of them.
So a lot of hard to deal w/ emotions ahead w/ the Swan Clan, which includes Rose & E now, too... But those two also have more coming their way from Carlisle's terminal illness.
I can understand how poor E is so confused as to why he cares, but Bella explained it to him beautifully & logically. What will poor Rosie go thru? ...
- Alright then, let's get on w/ it, shall we?...
All of the song lyrics at beginnings of chapters are always well placed & appropriate, right on spot... But when I read the lyrics to Hemorrhage by Fuel, I was overwhelmed w/ chills before I even read the chapter. It was haunting.
- Hell, I'm definitely ready to hear Charlie's story, I believe it'll be a good one. (Not like "La La La, sunshine & rainbows, good)- Somehow I feel there was a purpose of protection for them leaving... Maybe. Surely, I could be wrong.
- Yes, getting near the end & I'm already bummed.- Damn, I love this Edward.. I'm like.. Totally hot for him. Lol. - U did fantastic w/ all of them.
So a lot of hard to deal w/ emotions ahead w/ the Swan Clan, which includes Rose & E now, too... But those two also have more coming their way from Carlisle's terminal illness.
I can understand how poor E is so confused as to why he cares, but Bella explained it to him beautifully & logically. What will poor Rosie go thru? ...
- Alright then, let's get on w/ it, shall we?...
3/2/2015 c41 meelee72
AhHa! So, it's Charlie Swan.. I'd bEEn hoping to hear from them, but I wasn't expecting it quite yet. Ya got me, I thought Jacob somehow escaped... Although I did have a theory that the familiar female voice in Bella's dreams was Renee. ..(I see Charlie is alone)..
Wow, this just keeps getting better & better. U are very good w/ twists & turns & surprises, woman.
- ok, gotta say I could NOT stop laughing when Alice got "poured outta the pool w/ the water."
Omgsh, lolololol. Couldn't stop the giggles after the hard laughter died down. Haha. That was too cute.
- Man, Em & Rose each have ALOT to absorb when they get home.
Well, let's have a peek, yeah? (I can't stop think-talking like Edward)
AhHa! So, it's Charlie Swan.. I'd bEEn hoping to hear from them, but I wasn't expecting it quite yet. Ya got me, I thought Jacob somehow escaped... Although I did have a theory that the familiar female voice in Bella's dreams was Renee. ..(I see Charlie is alone)..
Wow, this just keeps getting better & better. U are very good w/ twists & turns & surprises, woman.
- ok, gotta say I could NOT stop laughing when Alice got "poured outta the pool w/ the water."
Omgsh, lolololol. Couldn't stop the giggles after the hard laughter died down. Haha. That was too cute.
- Man, Em & Rose each have ALOT to absorb when they get home.
Well, let's have a peek, yeah? (I can't stop think-talking like Edward)
3/2/2015 c39 meelee72
"HORNY AGAIN written on my forehead." - Ahh, lolololol.. That was funny.
- "... are you ready for more?" - that was.. *ahem* Well, that was... Yea.
So wow. So much has happened & we learned truly all of it. How painful. Necessary, tho. I'm so proud of E for deciding to get help.
Was proud of B for standing up to Tanya... Ugh. Whorey slag.
- seems all the duckies are lining up nicely, I'm really curious about parents... Both sets.
Anyway, enjoying, as usual. Great storyteller!
"HORNY AGAIN written on my forehead." - Ahh, lolololol.. That was funny.
- "... are you ready for more?" - that was.. *ahem* Well, that was... Yea.
So wow. So much has happened & we learned truly all of it. How painful. Necessary, tho. I'm so proud of E for deciding to get help.
Was proud of B for standing up to Tanya... Ugh. Whorey slag.
- seems all the duckies are lining up nicely, I'm really curious about parents... Both sets.
Anyway, enjoying, as usual. Great storyteller!