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6/1/2019 c23 UNITATO
Ok it was a really good story but the ending was kind of offence.
9/9/2010 c5 I'm A Multifandom Kinda Girl
this is good but it kinda irritating that you keep changing the names like several times you called Leah Willow and Jack Demetri and one time you called Billy Riley. Otherwise it is a great story
7/6/2010 c3 6Hoobeehoo
ohhhhhh nice i like it sneeky but i like it!
7/6/2010 c2 Hoobeehoo
Jett and jack are so mean grrrrrr
7/6/2010 c1 Hoobeehoo
Great, just great. It was interesting and made me want to read more!
3/12/2010 c23 3akd.715834
oh i love it so much jackie! CAN I BE YOUR BETE READER FOR THAT STORY! oh and im starting my story soon but my dad is hogging the laptop so i cant start! ALSO ITS GONNA BE ON THE BOOK HEIST SOCIETY! UPDATE GIRL AND CYA MONDAY!
2/16/2010 c22 akd.715834
OMG! this story is so good! ILY JACKIE! cya tomoz hun!
12/31/2009 c19 6Carliisubbercute
oh ok thats really good...so she's going to leave and sam gets nothing...hahaha
12/29/2009 c18 3akd.715834
THIS IS SO AWSOME JACKIE! I LOVE IT HEAPS! I REMEMBER YOUR FIRST VERSION OF THIS WHEN READING IT AT SCHOOL BUT THIS IS SO MUCH BETTER!
12/13/2009 c15 Panzy
god!

dat is so sexy babe!
12/13/2009 c17 6Carliisubbercute
m that was t=is she going to kill her self that way she wont have that kid that they killed her parents for?
12/10/2009 c14 Carliisubbercute
wow thats wow ok so...is she going to kill herself because that woul help but than again leah could never die she's just the BOMB!

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