
4/20/2021 c16
3DragonClanMaster
LOL! I am really liking this story! It's sorta jumping a bit, and some things are inconsistent (like how the crew hesitated to get in the bag when they had already been in it so she could fly them to rainbase), but still great.

LOL! I am really liking this story! It's sorta jumping a bit, and some things are inconsistent (like how the crew hesitated to get in the bag when they had already been in it so she could fly them to rainbase), but still great.
1/1/2021 c16 John adam
I read this in a short time and this was great and I loved it it! I wish u wrote about the first time zoro and the oc and I also wish u can update one more time bc this is a master piece
I read this in a short time and this was great and I loved it it! I wish u wrote about the first time zoro and the oc and I also wish u can update one more time bc this is a master piece
5/18/2019 c16 rubicatherine2
Okay so its been years, did u forget about this masterpiece? Please update
Okay so its been years, did u forget about this masterpiece? Please update
3/29/2018 c16 Guest
GOD DAMMIT! UPPDATE!
GOD DAMMIT! UPPDATE!
1/6/2018 c1 DragonClanMaster
I couldn't stop myself from writing this review.
This prologue was both sad, cute, and heart
breaking in so many ways yet still left me with
the need to read more!
I couldn't stop myself from writing this review.
This prologue was both sad, cute, and heart
breaking in so many ways yet still left me with
the need to read more!
12/18/2016 c16 qwsxedcrfv
Ah... um... last updated... 2 years ago... is this still active? I hope it is.
Ah... um... last updated... 2 years ago... is this still active? I hope it is.
5/14/2016 c16 DragonBookAddict
While there are a few spelling mistakes (unless they are different in your home from mine), I find myself enjoying this story quite a bit, and wish to know more. Too be honest, I actually find it kind of adorable. It's sweet, and even though Kaede is a bit overpowered, you give a reasonable explanation, and I like that she can't completely control her abilities.
While there are a few spelling mistakes (unless they are different in your home from mine), I find myself enjoying this story quite a bit, and wish to know more. Too be honest, I actually find it kind of adorable. It's sweet, and even though Kaede is a bit overpowered, you give a reasonable explanation, and I like that she can't completely control her abilities.
4/14/2016 c16
7littleditto
She is going to kill her father. And I'm going to enjoy it. Immensely.
Love your story!
Though I was a bit confused by one thing. When Igaram was blown up, you said in an Author's Note she didn't know he survived. Later, she did. The heck?
Oh yeah, and whatever happened to the rebels and Mr 2? They still have their missions, and if Mr 2 didn't save the ship, then he didn't befriend them, and he didn't end up in Impel Down. I know you are changing things, but I'm confused.

She is going to kill her father. And I'm going to enjoy it. Immensely.
Love your story!
Though I was a bit confused by one thing. When Igaram was blown up, you said in an Author's Note she didn't know he survived. Later, she did. The heck?
Oh yeah, and whatever happened to the rebels and Mr 2? They still have their missions, and if Mr 2 didn't save the ship, then he didn't befriend them, and he didn't end up in Impel Down. I know you are changing things, but I'm confused.
3/31/2016 c16 Guest
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update THIS, and your OTHER stories, again SOON! Thank you!
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update THIS, and your OTHER stories, again SOON! Thank you!
10/18/2015 c16 guest
oh... The timeline is officially screwed, I don't know what to say... This is going to be a difficult timeline to follow; that including that Alabasta arc is a little bit anticlimatic. Luffy doesn't get a power up since he didn't fight with Crocodile and whatever mayhem that follows behind. No Bon Clay either and Vivi saying goodbye...
Though...as Kaede has said, the timeline is officially screwed. I think i'm not gonna bother thinking about the differences anymore...
Nice story btw...
oh... The timeline is officially screwed, I don't know what to say... This is going to be a difficult timeline to follow; that including that Alabasta arc is a little bit anticlimatic. Luffy doesn't get a power up since he didn't fight with Crocodile and whatever mayhem that follows behind. No Bon Clay either and Vivi saying goodbye...
Though...as Kaede has said, the timeline is officially screwed. I think i'm not gonna bother thinking about the differences anymore...
Nice story btw...
9/19/2015 c16 black shadow
update please
update please
9/6/2015 c16 Guest
*sees about to meet franky*
*grins*
*sees 'to be continued'*
*cries*
Hehehe, this is great! Anyways, when is the next chapter? I can't wait T~T dammit what did you do to get me hooked onto the story so much? Maybe you put magical icecubes in my drink? Nah. Please, Please, PLEEEASE publish another chapter? I'll give you a cookie...Other than that, this story is great! Or should I say 'SUUUUUPERRRR~!'
*prompty apologizes for my annoying-ness*
Bye!
*sees about to meet franky*
*grins*
*sees 'to be continued'*
*cries*
Hehehe, this is great! Anyways, when is the next chapter? I can't wait T~T dammit what did you do to get me hooked onto the story so much? Maybe you put magical icecubes in my drink? Nah. Please, Please, PLEEEASE publish another chapter? I'll give you a cookie...Other than that, this story is great! Or should I say 'SUUUUUPERRRR~!'
*prompty apologizes for my annoying-ness*
Bye!
6/14/2015 c16 Lama
A present ? Seriously ?!
I want him as my father ! damn !
Please updaate soon ~
A present ? Seriously ?!
I want him as my father ! damn !
Please updaate soon ~