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10/6/2014 c9 AngelishDemon
OMG!GOD please write more!
9/7/2014 c9 Crazycookie2014
Love the story's keep updating
9/5/2014 c9 23PrettyKitty Luvs U
Loved it! :D
8/12/2014 c8 PrettyKitty Luvs U
It's a great story and I hope you update soon! :D
7/25/2014 c8 Crazycookie2014
Love the story and I love to see more also hope u get better
4/1/2014 c8 NotAMember
Ideas, huh? I know you haven't updated in literally, months, but here goes.
-some more Slade/Raven stuff, maybe they go see a scary movie that Raven actually is a little scared by and...etc. *wink wink*
-some crime fighting, you could develop a plot off of that, decide who they're fighting, how it happens, the aftermath, blah blah blah...
I'll try and come up with more later. Good job, keep writing! :)
4/1/2014 c6 guest
Hm. Slade seems a bit OOC. Other than that, good. :) work on your grammar and punctuation a little bit though. ;)
4/1/2014 c2 unknown
It's a good story, but please add ending punctuation after your characters say something. I.e. "Starfire, could you pass the mustard?"
And always start a new paragraph after any character says something so no one gets confused as to who is talking. This is an example: "I am talking for no apparent reason." Raven said.
Start of new paragraph, blah blah blah. I appreciate that this is a Slaven story not a BBRae story I am so sick of those. I have no clue why anyone would think they are a good couple but whatever. And you're like me, I don't like Terra either. _
Also, commas are your friend! Feel free to be descriptive and add a bit more to your story besides dialogue! I believe Teen Titan's is capitalized, and Beast Boy, both B's for his name are capitalized as well...and I can't wait to see what Robin will do to make Slade prove his worth, I didn't think he'd get on the team easily. Good job, keep writing! ;)
6/20/2012 c6 2Lucyole
very interesting story and poor bella damn

you to hell terra you are so annoying just

go some where else bitch i voting for bella and

B-B they are very cute as an pairing slade and raven

are the best overall i love em together.

the story si really good written, amazing funny and

sweet please write more i would be happy to read

the next chapter asap
8/12/2010 c4 4Royalraven007
I am glad that you are putting school first Shadow but I do hope that you find time to finish this story. If I can make a suggestion, say who is talking and space it out a bit more. Your story is really hard to keep track of who is doing what and who is talking. ^^ I'll still read though cuz I love Slade and you made him sound so hot in this story ^^ also I love the idea of him having a sister :) good luck with life and writing!
8/12/2010 c2 Royalraven007
Good story but you need to work on your grammer and flow of the story, right now it is kinda choppy :)
12/10/2009 c2 7fallfromreality
Very creative story! I love the idea of slade and RAven having siblings and Slade joining the TT

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