
9/26/2011 c1
1Just a flesh wound
Sorry to reply like this mate but your PM'ings turned off, re-activate it?

Sorry to reply like this mate but your PM'ings turned off, re-activate it?
10/24/2010 c1
52Andrei Rian
An Excellent Chapter
What's in the Classified Folder?
Is Ramirez going to read it and if he does how will he react to its discovery.
Will he find what out happen to Shepherd?
Will he also find out why Shepherd wanted PFC. Allen for?
Can You make of these stories.

An Excellent Chapter
What's in the Classified Folder?
Is Ramirez going to read it and if he does how will he react to its discovery.
Will he find what out happen to Shepherd?
Will he also find out why Shepherd wanted PFC. Allen for?
Can You make of these stories.
1/12/2010 c1
160KnightQueen
[Belated Review]: I thought your name looked familiar when you reviewed my story (at least when your Username was "Fictlizuh"). I didn't know you were the guy who wrote this story.
Any who, I kept meaning to review this, but ended up getting sidetracked by a multitude of other things. Regardless though, I enjoyed reading this story the first time and its even better the second go-around.
You really captured the "post-apocalyptic" atmosphere of a invaded Washington D.C., not to mention Corporal Dunn's tendency to voice his opinion freely when he strongly disagrees with something. I also liked your take on James Ramirez's personality.
Adding to favorites (if I haven't already done that).
Sakura123

[Belated Review]: I thought your name looked familiar when you reviewed my story (at least when your Username was "Fictlizuh"). I didn't know you were the guy who wrote this story.
Any who, I kept meaning to review this, but ended up getting sidetracked by a multitude of other things. Regardless though, I enjoyed reading this story the first time and its even better the second go-around.
You really captured the "post-apocalyptic" atmosphere of a invaded Washington D.C., not to mention Corporal Dunn's tendency to voice his opinion freely when he strongly disagrees with something. I also liked your take on James Ramirez's personality.
Adding to favorites (if I haven't already done that).
Sakura123
12/22/2009 c1 Rpgingmaster
Honestly, I can just smell the tension in the air as these guys try to avoid losing it as they see the ruins of the nation's capital, the aftermath of all the chaos they saw, and all the horror they went through, and then having to stick around and help put back together what was shot to hell and back, and I can definitely see the resignation and defeated feeling you portrayed.
I'd like to see more of this.
Honestly, I can just smell the tension in the air as these guys try to avoid losing it as they see the ruins of the nation's capital, the aftermath of all the chaos they saw, and all the horror they went through, and then having to stick around and help put back together what was shot to hell and back, and I can definitely see the resignation and defeated feeling you portrayed.
I'd like to see more of this.
12/22/2009 c1
11SpiritOfSherwood
Very well written with a good conversation and story structure. Great to see the continuation of the view from the 75th rangers after Whiskey Hotel. Any chances of a counterattack and "burning down moscow"? It would be made of win.
9/10
The Spirit

Very well written with a good conversation and story structure. Great to see the continuation of the view from the 75th rangers after Whiskey Hotel. Any chances of a counterattack and "burning down moscow"? It would be made of win.
9/10
The Spirit
12/20/2009 c1 DHS00
I really enjoyed reading this. It is by far one of the best CoD fics I've read. I'm actually looking forward to reading some more. Keep up the wonderful work. :D
I really enjoyed reading this. It is by far one of the best CoD fics I've read. I'm actually looking forward to reading some more. Keep up the wonderful work. :D
12/10/2009 c1
12Dante-SonofSparda-EX21
Shit. I don't know what to tell ya, it's perfect in my eyes! You didn't miss a beat in COD storyline, the grammar looks pretty well done (Either that or it must be me reviewing this at 0454 in the morning. ), and you got everyone's character down pretty well, plus you gave character to a silent Pvt. Ramirez. And I'm liking it.
Keep it up, I may be a Marine Poolee but I give my hats off to the Army Rangers in MW2. They got some man.
Semper Fi!

Shit. I don't know what to tell ya, it's perfect in my eyes! You didn't miss a beat in COD storyline, the grammar looks pretty well done (Either that or it must be me reviewing this at 0454 in the morning. ), and you got everyone's character down pretty well, plus you gave character to a silent Pvt. Ramirez. And I'm liking it.
Keep it up, I may be a Marine Poolee but I give my hats off to the Army Rangers in MW2. They got some man.
Semper Fi!
12/9/2009 c1
3chocolatetater-tot
Know what I've come to notice. People who ACTUALLY have a talent for writing, usually don't get a lot of attention from others sometimes. I love the story so far. I'm a sucker for dialogue, but your descriptions didn't bore me like some people's do, it kept me interested. I'm seeing more Task Force stuff (me being one of them...) and I'm happy to see some Ranger action as well.
You're doing a nice job. Keep it up.

Know what I've come to notice. People who ACTUALLY have a talent for writing, usually don't get a lot of attention from others sometimes. I love the story so far. I'm a sucker for dialogue, but your descriptions didn't bore me like some people's do, it kept me interested. I'm seeing more Task Force stuff (me being one of them...) and I'm happy to see some Ranger action as well.
You're doing a nice job. Keep it up.
12/9/2009 c1 Eiram87
I don't have anything terribly constructive to say...
Great story though, I don't think I've seen any other stories about Ramirez. I can't wait for more.
I don't have anything terribly constructive to say...
Great story though, I don't think I've seen any other stories about Ramirez. I can't wait for more.