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for YOU WILL YIELD AND BE MY MATE

11/25/2010 c9 Duckbutt
Oh my! You're story is too much fun! It was a "favorite" of another author. I just love this spunky Sookie and rather "frazzled" Eric at this point -and Pam as the go-between and sometimes partner in crime :-)

Please please please finish it! It's such a wonderful fic!

Pat
11/5/2010 c12 ericjessy
Great story! Will you continue with this story?
10/14/2010 c12 2Maori kotiro
Love Pammy an her sass,an especially her new friendship with Sookie...OH PAMMY...lol.."Pathetic Vermin!"
10/14/2010 c10 Maori kotiro
Awe two can play that game...lol...PRICELESS!
10/14/2010 c8 Maori kotiro
Vampire dating 4 dummies.lol.priceless
10/14/2010 c7 Maori kotiro
This story is a crackup,love it!
10/14/2010 c5 Maori kotiro
Awe man this shyt is funny..
10/14/2010 c4 Maori kotiro
Oh this is priceless!
10/14/2010 c3 Maori kotiro
MINE...MINE...MINE..Oh i love Pam...lol..eric a preschooler.lol
10/12/2010 c12 1teewhy1977
FINALLY GETTING TO SOME STEAMY ERIC AND SOOKIE PARTS! I DIDNT LIKE THE GUITAR PART THOUGH WAS A BIT CHEEZY BUT EVERYTHING ELSE IS QUITE WONDERFUL
10/12/2010 c6 teewhy1977
WHAT A WONDERFUL CHAPTER! ERIC IS SOOO DOMINANT JUST LIKE WE LIKE HIM! SOOO FORCEFUL ! YAY WELL HOPEFULLY SOOKIE WILL GET PUNISHED IN THE BASEMENT SOON! ME AND MY FRIENDS HOPE THIS IS A LONG STORY!
9/17/2010 c12 2jewelpearl
I really like the "Mine" struggle between Eric and Sookie, and how Eric pretends to get it, but really doesn't. I would like to see that develop more. This last chapter got a little strange, but the rest of the story is really good. I hope you update soon.
8/29/2010 c4 murderscene
too ooc for my tastes, sorry. in fanfiction, its best to have a decent knowledge of the characters and slowly change them through character growth rather than change them all together, eric is too whiny and annoying he doesnt particularly care about her or what she does at this point.
8/29/2010 c3 murderscene
it's spelt rene not rena.
8/26/2010 c12 7MommaMinion40
wow! I read 1-12 tonight and I love it! Great story! I love it! I love how you gradually work Sookie up in to this more confident person! WOW! Great job! HUGS:)
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