for YOU WILL YIELD AND BE MY MATE8/1/2010 c6 KYSun
Sookie is going to throw a fit when she finds out what Eric has done now. Her own personal day guy and she can't stand him. LOL
Looks like Steve and Bobby will be getting the same punishment in the basement and Pam is having fun doing it..Great writing on the story, keeps me laughing most of the time. Sookie throwing her fits gives Pam so much to use against Eric.. Thanks :)
Sookie is going to throw a fit when she finds out what Eric has done now. Her own personal day guy and she can't stand him. LOL
Looks like Steve and Bobby will be getting the same punishment in the basement and Pam is having fun doing it..Great writing on the story, keeps me laughing most of the time. Sookie throwing her fits gives Pam so much to use against Eric.. Thanks :)
8/1/2010 c4 KYSun
This chapter was hilarious. If Sookie and Eric go to best buy I hope the same sales person is still there. Loved the license plate for the car even though Sookie was furious about it.. Great story so far. Thanks
This chapter was hilarious. If Sookie and Eric go to best buy I hope the same sales person is still there. Loved the license plate for the car even though Sookie was furious about it.. Great story so far. Thanks
7/31/2010 c1 
2LQTM
Sookie is kinda annoying and how u have written her she is almost as dumb as a rock i admit i have found one or 2 parts funny but the rest of the chapter overrides those parts Eric is i think a bit ooc and Eric does not even seem surprised that bill asked sookie to marry him he just keeps going on about how she is going to be his and and all that. the first chapter didnt catch my attention or spark my interest at all and first chapters r like first impressions they count and i cant see myself continuing reading this story. i am sorry
2LQTMSookie is kinda annoying and how u have written her she is almost as dumb as a rock i admit i have found one or 2 parts funny but the rest of the chapter overrides those parts Eric is i think a bit ooc and Eric does not even seem surprised that bill asked sookie to marry him he just keeps going on about how she is going to be his and and all that. the first chapter didnt catch my attention or spark my interest at all and first chapters r like first impressions they count and i cant see myself continuing reading this story. i am sorry
7/30/2010 c12 Madam Scragz
hey there,
I love this story so much and i thought this chapter was fantastic! Kepp up the good work, i cannot wait for more ;)
M. Scragz
hey there,
I love this story so much and i thought this chapter was fantastic! Kepp up the good work, i cannot wait for more ;)
M. Scragz
7/30/2010 c12 krystalsidd
Steaming hoT! d=fuk me aye i love it 3 3 you are seriously an amazing writier... loved it :)
Steaming hoT! d=fuk me aye i love it 3 3 you are seriously an amazing writier... loved it :)
7/30/2010 c1 QualityReviewer
I liked the plot idea but, besides using a few ideas from the books that only the readers will know (calling Sookie his lover), I felt the style of the characters acting/thinking/talking was too annoying and unreal. You made Sookie sound a little too dumb with asking questions that book/tv Sookie would be smart enough to already know the answer. Conclusion: the style of writing turned me off to reading more.
I liked the plot idea but, besides using a few ideas from the books that only the readers will know (calling Sookie his lover), I felt the style of the characters acting/thinking/talking was too annoying and unreal. You made Sookie sound a little too dumb with asking questions that book/tv Sookie would be smart enough to already know the answer. Conclusion: the style of writing turned me off to reading more.
7/29/2010 c12 lovingvikingeric
Wonderful and I love it! I love what sookie did to Jason! Her deserved more but that is a nice start!
Update soon plz...
Wonderful and I love it! I love what sookie did to Jason! Her deserved more but that is a nice start!
Update soon plz...
7/28/2010 c12 10GaijinVamp1
WOW! Sookie can rock it out too!
I loved the shopping scenes. Pam is so much fun.
Eric should hire them as the house band.
10GaijinVamp1WOW! Sookie can rock it out too!
I loved the shopping scenes. Pam is so much fun.
Eric should hire them as the house band.
7/28/2010 c12 Daph Lina
Just found this story an fell in love! I love your strong minded self sufficient Sookie. I also like how Eric finds ways to care for her asd he should. I can't wait to see them come together. Thank you for your story. I can't wait for your next update
Just found this story an fell in love! I love your strong minded self sufficient Sookie. I also like how Eric finds ways to care for her asd he should. I can't wait to see them come together. Thank you for your story. I can't wait for your next update
7/28/2010 c12 ldh26159
I continue to be a huge fan of your story. It is very entertaining. I love all of the additional skills you are giving Sookie. I am looking forward to seeing where you take this story to next.
I continue to be a huge fan of your story. It is very entertaining. I love all of the additional skills you are giving Sookie. I am looking forward to seeing where you take this story to next.