for YOU WILL YIELD AND BE MY MATE12/15/2009 c3 
3curly-kitty
Just then Pam opens the door to the office. With a serious look, she walks over to the desk grabs the stapler and yell. MINE. Then laughs as she walks out of the room. Oh, that Pam.
I have got up and made some food and done a little cleaning since I read that line, and I am still laughing over it now.
Great story so far can't wait for more.
3curly-kittyJust then Pam opens the door to the office. With a serious look, she walks over to the desk grabs the stapler and yell. MINE. Then laughs as she walks out of the room. Oh, that Pam.
I have got up and made some food and done a little cleaning since I read that line, and I am still laughing over it now.
Great story so far can't wait for more.
12/11/2009 c3 15yo-digitty-yo-yo
I like it :) There are a few errors, but FAR fewer than most stories I've read by un-beta'd authors. I love the spin you're taking and really enjoyed reading this! I hope you update soon hon ;)
*hugs*
Shanny/yo-diggity
15yo-digitty-yo-yoI like it :) There are a few errors, but FAR fewer than most stories I've read by un-beta'd authors. I love the spin you're taking and really enjoyed reading this! I hope you update soon hon ;)
*hugs*
Shanny/yo-diggity
12/11/2009 c3 VampSexual
I wasn't sure with the first chapter but I think you've got the writing thing down! Keep up the good work!
I wasn't sure with the first chapter but I think you've got the writing thing down! Keep up the good work!
12/11/2009 c2 ericsmine
right now your sookieis annoying,hopefully she matures some in the future.Wow so its a different take on why Bill came to Bontemps, interesting.
right now your sookieis annoying,hopefully she matures some in the future.Wow so its a different take on why Bill came to Bontemps, interesting.
12/10/2009 c1 Vamp Winter
while Sookie has morals I think you mean she is mortal? and I doubt Eric thinks of her morality but her mortality? quite a few errors which throws off the flow
while Sookie has morals I think you mean she is mortal? and I doubt Eric thinks of her morality but her mortality? quite a few errors which throws off the flow
12/10/2009 c1 25emmettismymonkeyman
Eric is a stalking freak, he is very ooc than what he was in the series, he sneaks in moves, doesn't lay them on the table...
25emmettismymonkeymanEric is a stalking freak, he is very ooc than what he was in the series, he sneaks in moves, doesn't lay them on the table...