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11/18/2012 c1 2Starcloudy94
yes you should! (yells) and great work on the Japanese by the way XD
3/8/2010 c1 Zexion46Edith
yay for cookies and roxion yaoi! i would like to see the next chapter soon. please *makes a puppy-dog face*
1/28/2010 c1 9punkanimelover93
it seems good so far just alittle hard time with some of the situations like one part seemed like Roxas and Zexion were already going out another seemed like Roxas didnt like Zexion because he kissed him or something...?

But yes it's pretty good and I'd like to read more! :)
12/12/2009 c1 nonavailable
I really liked how you wrote it from one of the characters POV :) I think that maybe it needs a bit more explaination as to why they love one another . . . maybe you could have them as having been in love with one another in a past life with a tragic past and put that in somehow? I dunno, just me rambling here again lol Anyway, keep at it and take care:)

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