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Are you going to continue this
Are you going to continue this
12/14/2009 c1 
6Odyssey's Burner
I'm really liking the direction this is taking. Keep up the good work!
6Odyssey's BurnerI'm really liking the direction this is taking. Keep up the good work!
12/13/2009 c1 11Emperor Andross
Good first chapter, it was intriguing and well written. It was a little hard for me to work out who was saying what when Fox first met up with Peppy, but apart form that it was smooth reading.
I'll keep an eye out for this one in the future;)
11Emperor AndrossGood first chapter, it was intriguing and well written. It was a little hard for me to work out who was saying what when Fox first met up with Peppy, but apart form that it was smooth reading.
I'll keep an eye out for this one in the future;)