for Gone5/23/2010 c1 
22hifield
You did a good job on this scene - a slice of what might have happened - very well done.
22hifieldYou did a good job on this scene - a slice of what might have happened - very well done.
5/22/2010 c1 2Confident is my Middle Name
Dang, this one aint bad either, good emotion on both ends, I like that you still included Sheppards 'inappropriate wit' that we all know and love, its short, but a lot of things happen and a lot of character facets get explored in a short amount of time.
2Confident is my Middle NameDang, this one aint bad either, good emotion on both ends, I like that you still included Sheppards 'inappropriate wit' that we all know and love, its short, but a lot of things happen and a lot of character facets get explored in a short amount of time.
12/13/2009 c1 11SOUND-Art
This is so good, I love it. You write really well, it flows so easily. Too easily almost!
Keep writing, I can't wait to read more1
11SOUND-ArtThis is so good, I love it. You write really well, it flows so easily. Too easily almost!
Keep writing, I can't wait to read more1
12/13/2009 c1 29Sachita
Hi! I liked your story a lot, very well-done. This sentence seemed to be especially poignant to me: “You could always crochet.” Such a Sheppard-esque thing to say, but at the same time it shows his whole despair. He knows that he is powerless to stop what is happening and uses sarcasm to cover that up. Very moving story, very sad and very well-written. Great job!
-Sachita
29SachitaHi! I liked your story a lot, very well-done. This sentence seemed to be especially poignant to me: “You could always crochet.” Such a Sheppard-esque thing to say, but at the same time it shows his whole despair. He knows that he is powerless to stop what is happening and uses sarcasm to cover that up. Very moving story, very sad and very well-written. Great job!
-Sachita