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12/14/2012 c11 Guest
sicko
7/26/2012 c10 Dogluvr18
THAT WAS CREEPY
Y DID U KILL THEM ALICE IS MY FAV WHY
12/14/2011 c9 JJ
Starkid. Woot.
6/9/2010 c1 Acceber98
bad punctuation, but otherwise good thus far :):):):):):):):)
2/24/2010 c9 Rebekah Mae
Humm ... well not wanting either but I think it is a males turn to go.
2/20/2010 c9 4HazelEyedShadowhunter
Hii! This chapter was great! Thank God Bella died! I was waiting for that ever since I read the books!

'She looked like a Mexican gang basher. The murder was on the ground moaning in pain.

“You go Glen Coco!” Emmett screamed earning confused looks from me and Jasper.' LOL! That line made me laugh! If I'm right, that last thing that Emmett said was from 'Mean Girls'?

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
2/20/2010 c1 bhal
Good story, update soon!

-Lain :]
2/6/2010 c7 Rebekah Mae
Been reading both choices. Love it all- and racking my brain on who the killer is. Are you doing both choices still or just the one with the most votes? Great story so far, can't wait for more!
2/6/2010 c7 HazelEyedShadowhunter
Heyy!

I can't believe Edward died... *sobs in a corner* But I suppose he was the one stupid enough to go alone in a house with a murderer on the loose...

Good chapter, excep for, you know, the Edward killing...

Do we actually ever know who the killer is? Is it someone we know or just some unknown crazy psychopath?

Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon PLEASE!

~B~
1/25/2010 c4 12Rock-Mock
i never expected you to be able to write such a thrilling story,

and i must say im impressed.

i like it.

and i HAVE to say one thing.

hahha DIE BITCH...

(Rosalie)

ahhahahahaah
1/25/2010 c2 Rock-Mock
hhahahah DUCKIES
1/21/2010 c6 4HazelEyedShadowhunter
Heyy! Wow, three updates in one day! This chapter was soo sad! I feel so bad for Emmett... and the girls. I imagine that they're scared shitless, as I would be in a situation like this...

Anyway, this chapter was really REALLY good! I loved it, despite the sadness of Rosalie's death and the death threats...

Update soon please!

~B~
1/21/2010 c5 HazelEyedShadowhunter
Hi!

This chapter was good too, even though you kinda switched to third person halfway through and changed back to first person. But never mind. I can't wait to read chapter 6!

Update soon please?

~B~
1/21/2010 c4 HazelEyedShadowhunter
Heyy!

Ohmygod! I can't believe Rose died! It's so sad, especially for Emmett!

Great chapter though! Your writing is great!

Yes, well, I'll be back, I'm off to read chapter 5 (my curiousity always gets the better of me)!

~B~
12/14/2009 c2 29StopTheMadness
O Pleas update soon :)
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