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11/30/2021 c1 VirReturnsFromMinbar
Very moving.
4/7/2010 c1 5Rosy-Fingered-Dawn
Just remove a few of the "fallings" and make it longer. It's an excellent start :)
12/15/2009 c1 32Kitsune Heart
Er...no. Remove a lot of the "I am falling falling falling" bits and maybe. As of, now, no. There's not enough substance. This could be about anything, really. So...no. Better luck next time.
12/14/2009 c1 14Caris L. Clearwater
Okay...I like the idea, but it was a bit too short, don'tcha think? And the word 'falling' was used a bit too many times. But, still, I get the jest of it, and don't think you should give up on the idea. Try to make your next entry longer, and with more verses. You should probably also include what happened to Holly, and what Artemis is doing with himself. Take risks. BE descriptive! Peace! :)

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