for The Other Woman's Burden5/9/2017 c2 Guest
Its amazing when are you updating?
Its amazing when are you updating?
8/3/2014 c2 Guest
is there any possibility for update author-san ? i am really curiuos .
is there any possibility for update author-san ? i am really curiuos .
7/4/2013 c2 
3Aquos35
This is what I would say,rather interesting.
But I am well aware that saying please update will not help anything as 2009 was the last time you updated but please consider the readers would be very disappointing for me if you discontinue this(like what you said in your profile).But please consider to update this promising story since I am now a big fan of you could update in a few months time;until then,I would patiently wait.
3Aquos35This is what I would say,rather interesting.
But I am well aware that saying please update will not help anything as 2009 was the last time you updated but please consider the readers would be very disappointing for me if you discontinue this(like what you said in your profile).But please consider to update this promising story since I am now a big fan of you could update in a few months time;until then,I would patiently wait.
8/29/2010 c2 35kaorinin
This is an awesome fic! I'm feeling curious, is it really a ghost who kidnapped shinichi?
The case about Hashiba Ruka is a good one. I really am feeling like I read the manga, not the fic.
I think there's something wrong with Hashiba Yana. Well, I hope it will be a good clue XP
I'm waiting your update XD. I wanna know the end :)
35kaorininThis is an awesome fic! I'm feeling curious, is it really a ghost who kidnapped shinichi?
The case about Hashiba Ruka is a good one. I really am feeling like I read the manga, not the fic.
I think there's something wrong with Hashiba Yana. Well, I hope it will be a good clue XP
I'm waiting your update XD. I wanna know the end :)
1/13/2010 c2 rainfromheaven
Great start! :D I can't wait to see this unravel. :D PLease update soon! :D
Great start! :D I can't wait to see this unravel. :D PLease update soon! :D
1/5/2010 c2 12fanfatic08
i'm here to demand for an update. hehe.
no, seriously. i am eager for an update soon. =^_^=
12fanfatic08i'm here to demand for an update. hehe.
no, seriously. i am eager for an update soon. =^_^=
12/27/2009 c1 haibaraai4869
I really can't wait for the next chapter! Good job!
I really can't wait for the next chapter! Good job!
12/27/2009 c2 5Khail
I like your style, except for the parts where you romanize Japanese words.
and
“Yeah… Hashiba Yana...” she said slowly.
“...in meeting Hashiba Ruka,” Haibara admitted
Ruka should be Yana I think.
5KhailI like your style, except for the parts where you romanize Japanese words.
and
“Yeah… Hashiba Yana...” she said slowly.
“...in meeting Hashiba Ruka,” Haibara admitted
Ruka should be Yana I think.
12/26/2009 c2 14Gia Pi
Oh, great! I like it how you gave a lot of details in this story. Somehow, I can feel the hesitation that was in Haibara's heart.
How you describe the character is very good.. ^^
UPDATE soon ^^
14Gia PiOh, great! I like it how you gave a lot of details in this story. Somehow, I can feel the hesitation that was in Haibara's heart.
How you describe the character is very good.. ^^
UPDATE soon ^^
12/24/2009 c1 maddie88
It's thrilling and the storyline is a bit new. I'll follow it. Please stay original
It's thrilling and the storyline is a bit new. I'll follow it. Please stay original
12/17/2009 c1 haibaraai4869
LOVE IT! It's hase benne a long time since i hadn't read a good fanfic like yours keep on writing update soon!
LOVE IT! It's hase benne a long time since i hadn't read a good fanfic like yours keep on writing update soon!
12/15/2009 c1 10haveabreakfast
give me morree!
aah. i hope there'll be much much more stories on Ai Haibara
like it! update soon, onegai shimasu :)
10haveabreakfastgive me morree!
aah. i hope there'll be much much more stories on Ai Haibara
like it! update soon, onegai shimasu :)