for The Last Night10/19/2011 c1 kimiko
:D badass
:D badass
4/15/2011 c1 
9Kaila Azroth
Just wanted to say that I loved this read really much because it showed a different Hinata overcoming her differences and the poem went really well with the story and that your a great writer!
:D
9Kaila AzrothJust wanted to say that I loved this read really much because it showed a different Hinata overcoming her differences and the poem went really well with the story and that your a great writer!
:D
3/27/2010 c1 7Chamberlinxz
You're story was really amazing some parts of the dialog sounded like they were rhyming. You really have beautiful writing keep it up.
7ChamberlinxzYou're story was really amazing some parts of the dialog sounded like they were rhyming. You really have beautiful writing keep it up.
3/19/2010 c1 4TarraWoods
this is so good! emotional, and sweet..and I always thought Sasuke had a secret soft spot for Hinata..
I also really love the song choice...skillet is like my fav band...and I love how you wrote this based on your feelings, makes it so good and easy to relate to...I could almost feel Her pain...
4TarraWoodsthis is so good! emotional, and sweet..and I always thought Sasuke had a secret soft spot for Hinata..
I also really love the song choice...skillet is like my fav band...and I love how you wrote this based on your feelings, makes it so good and easy to relate to...I could almost feel Her pain...
12/16/2009 c1 34HiN4-cH4n
I so love this story! It's really well written, I loved how she got angry at Naruto and how it wasn't the typical she realizes Naruto sucks and goes to Sasuke.
You did good, the song does fit the story and you explained really well when Sasuke was telling her about not dying. Anyway it's really really cool. I really like it, Kudos! :D
Love & Cupcakes,
HiN4-cH4n
34HiN4-cH4nI so love this story! It's really well written, I loved how she got angry at Naruto and how it wasn't the typical she realizes Naruto sucks and goes to Sasuke.
You did good, the song does fit the story and you explained really well when Sasuke was telling her about not dying. Anyway it's really really cool. I really like it, Kudos! :D
Love & Cupcakes,
HiN4-cH4n
12/15/2009 c1 2AmaiShokora
Wow, this was a very very good one-shot! Makes me wish you would do a full story on this one. Keep it up!
2AmaiShokoraWow, this was a very very good one-shot! Makes me wish you would do a full story on this one. Keep it up!
12/14/2009 c1 33halfdemon-kai
Yaay! I was wondering when or if you were going to post this story. :) I really liked it, even if it wasn't in your 'genre'. You're not just good at funny things. :D I really really really liked this one shot, I think you did a very good job of expressing yourself through this, though I think suicide is a little harsh... but you can't help how you feel about things. Remember buddy, I'll always be here for you. :3 *hugs*
halfdemon-kai
33halfdemon-kaiYaay! I was wondering when or if you were going to post this story. :) I really liked it, even if it wasn't in your 'genre'. You're not just good at funny things. :D I really really really liked this one shot, I think you did a very good job of expressing yourself through this, though I think suicide is a little harsh... but you can't help how you feel about things. Remember buddy, I'll always be here for you. :3 *hugs*
halfdemon-kai