for She's mine2/21/2021 c2 Guest
andy should be the one
andy should be the one
4/3/2019 c2 Guest
Either Valtor or Andy and then make them rape Bloom by the way great story, please continue!
Either Valtor or Andy and then make them rape Bloom by the way great story, please continue!
6/17/2018 c2 kineuhansen
make the sex chapter from after the party with bloom in that red dress and is bloom first time
make the sex chapter from after the party with bloom in that red dress and is bloom first time
10/4/2017 c2 Guest
It should be about Andy, Bloom's ex boyfriend doing everything in his power to get Bloom ba
It should be about Andy, Bloom's ex boyfriend doing everything in his power to get Bloom ba
5/24/2017 c2 Guest
The Who's jealous of sky should be riven
The Who's jealous of sky should be riven
2/16/2017 c2 
6Kagehana15
another random student at red fountain and possibly a citizen of sparks/domino.
6Kagehana15another random student at red fountain and possibly a citizen of sparks/domino.
1/22/2017 c2 fanfics craycray
U gotta losen up, I need to write a book I just focus, meditate, or dream about it. I think u should add drama into it
U gotta losen up, I need to write a book I just focus, meditate, or dream about it. I think u should add drama into it
11/11/2016 c2 Anonymous
Bloom has an old friend from earth who is also a secret Specialist who is a boy and liked her but she thought of him as a friend.
Bloom has an old friend from earth who is also a secret Specialist who is a boy and liked her but she thought of him as a friend.
1/9/2016 c2 andinofelix
PLEAAAASE UPDATE ohhh and make it riven that would bring so much drama to the story
PLEAAAASE UPDATE ohhh and make it riven that would bring so much drama to the story
10/17/2015 c1 Fire fairy
Type your review here. Update soon.I am waiting to read it
Type your review here. Update soon.I am waiting to read it
10/17/2015 c2 Fire fairy
Type your review can made brandon jelous or maybe darkar or valtor.
Type your review can made brandon jelous or maybe darkar or valtor.
9/28/2015 c2 Lihotmkx
Devon
Devon