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11/29/2011 c1 30fAteD lOvE
This was totally in-character. Great job. I love :)
8/1/2010 c1 Gildedcagesaregilded
Ah, just splendid. Very gorgeous fic that I wish Arakawa would have put into manga form for us Royai fans.
6/18/2010 c1 27Anorexia
For your first, this was truley amazing. Like you've got this natural talent to ooze out sweet Fullmetal fanfictions.
5/29/2010 c1 7Ayla-tan
It was good^^ I liked it!

I'm so happy that Roy and Riza have each other- especially for Roy, since he's so closed off to emotions and such anyway...Riza is a great help to him, whenever he feels sorrow...

You showed that special bond of theirs very well^^
5/23/2010 c1 30Scenro
good job
5/9/2010 c1 8adelaidemiller
Aww. That was beautiful.
4/23/2010 c1 25Pickles the Great
All around lovely. Keep writing FMA fics, you're great at it.

~Pickles
4/19/2010 c1 25mebh
This is really beautiful. Loved it :)
12/17/2009 c1 27Anne Packrat
Good for your first try! I like the sweet romance. You have some misspellings though, so maybe proofread a bit more next time?
12/16/2009 c1 4Rambling Whovian
Aww, that was so adorable o(^^)o

Absolutely brilliant in fact. Haven't read this beautiful a fic this week.

-x-

In regards to 102, it's IS a terrible tragedy. Roy didn't deserve that at all, he was forced to open the gate, not chose to like the Elric's *crys* but it makes a brilliant opportunity for fics like yours. Maybe now they can truly be together.

...sorry for the rambling by the way
12/16/2009 c1 3kkkce
heartwarming and bittersweet. i love it
12/15/2009 c1 2Ewa Snow
Not bad for a first fic. Not bad at all!
12/15/2009 c1 40BlackBrightField2007
Nice work!
12/15/2009 c1 20ssadropout
“Sorry, sir,” Fuery’s voice said close to him, “we had no choice.” This really made me laugh. I also liked how you brought in the part about not using ranks.

I enjoyed your story and am looking forward to reading more from you.

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