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1/2/2010 c1 42QuixoticQuest
Well, I guess this is supposed to be the missing scene between the end of TWD and AWA as your description says.

I like how emotional and to the point it is. But I think it would do to have a little more interaction in the piece, but that's just me. I did feel the hurt that Nita felt in the piece and it's realistic that she'd feel really hopeless. Grief is like that at first (and even later you probably feel that every so often).

Nice work!

-Don "QuixoticQuest" =)
12/16/2009 c1 45Curlscat
This was sad. Nice, though. What's with the title, though?

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