for Haunted Memories1/2/2010 c1 
27Echos of 2008-2009
por favor, pleaSE let me tell yuou how much this sorty has touhed my heart. this is bueatiful. if you were to continure... anyway the emotions are perfect and i am just speechless...
27Echos of 2008-2009por favor, pleaSE let me tell yuou how much this sorty has touhed my heart. this is bueatiful. if you were to continure... anyway the emotions are perfect and i am just speechless...
12/20/2009 c1 Gerosan
aww ;-; is there going to be a part two? it's okay if nit, but it was so beautiful! ;-; Poor Germany. I suppose Italy is stonger in more than the usual way :D great fic! I really felt for them... also, Prussia, lol. @Italy owing him one, hehe~ great fic^3^
aww ;-; is there going to be a part two? it's okay if nit, but it was so beautiful! ;-; Poor Germany. I suppose Italy is stonger in more than the usual way :D great fic! I really felt for them... also, Prussia, lol. @Italy owing him one, hehe~ great fic^3^
12/18/2009 c1 Akito 17
This is really beautiful fan fiction in many ways. I am emotionally touched by it, since it's so deeply written making my heart melt. I cant say anything more, I am already overly emotionally stunned so it left me without words... It would make me even happier if you continue writing fictions for this lovely couple.
This is really beautiful fan fiction in many ways. I am emotionally touched by it, since it's so deeply written making my heart melt. I cant say anything more, I am already overly emotionally stunned so it left me without words... It would make me even happier if you continue writing fictions for this lovely couple.
12/17/2009 c1 51Flashback 1701
I almost cried. You wove such a powerful story. You used good language and, as far as I can tell, there weren't any typos. Kudos.
It's true, too, because if you think about Hitler's actions, you know that Germany would be completely disgusted about what he'd allowed.
It also helps that you're writing about my all-time favorite pairing.
51Flashback 1701I almost cried. You wove such a powerful story. You used good language and, as far as I can tell, there weren't any typos. Kudos.
It's true, too, because if you think about Hitler's actions, you know that Germany would be completely disgusted about what he'd allowed.
It also helps that you're writing about my all-time favorite pairing.
12/17/2009 c1 ChibiPandaChan
I love this story! It's so wonderfully written~! however, there was one mistake that i found... "ich bin sehr traurig" is "I am very sad" as traurig is sad.
I'm sorry is "Es tut mir leid"... and assuming you want to say very sorry, "Es tut mir sehr leid"
Just wanted to let you know. Everything else is very well, though, to what I can see!
I love this story! It's so wonderfully written~! however, there was one mistake that i found... "ich bin sehr traurig" is "I am very sad" as traurig is sad.
I'm sorry is "Es tut mir leid"... and assuming you want to say very sorry, "Es tut mir sehr leid"
Just wanted to let you know. Everything else is very well, though, to what I can see!
12/17/2009 c1 Ailynm
aw this story is so cute x3
really x3
I love how you discibe the situations x3
but there is only one thing I have to say
if you wanted to write I'm very sorry in german it doesn't mean Ich bin sehr traurig thats mean I'm really sad or something
I'm very sorry mean "es tut mir sehr leid" ^^
this is the only thing
greets
Ailynm
aw this story is so cute x3
really x3
I love how you discibe the situations x3
but there is only one thing I have to say
if you wanted to write I'm very sorry in german it doesn't mean Ich bin sehr traurig thats mean I'm really sad or something
I'm very sorry mean "es tut mir sehr leid" ^^
this is the only thing
greets
Ailynm