for An Assassin's Heart9/24/2015 c5 Guest
This story had so much potential :(
This story had so much potential :(
3/5/2011 c5 edwarsgirl1991
I've been waiting forever! Please update!
I've been waiting forever! Please update!
3/1/2010 c5 
2Emmauk26
love love love this story it's so good, so glad that Edward was there to save Bella, he's so cute and protective, hehe, please please update soon, I need to read more thia story is fantastic keep it up. ;-D
2Emmauk26love love love this story it's so good, so glad that Edward was there to save Bella, he's so cute and protective, hehe, please please update soon, I need to read more thia story is fantastic keep it up. ;-D
2/28/2010 c5 Pounce21
This was a good chapter. I liked getting a little more information on Bella's mother. It will be interesting to see if Emmet and Rosalie are in the story any more. Please update soon!
This was a good chapter. I liked getting a little more information on Bella's mother. It will be interesting to see if Emmet and Rosalie are in the story any more. Please update soon!
2/22/2010 c4 pleassseee
UPDATE!:{D
UPDATE!:{D
2/21/2010 c4 Kree-on-toast
reviews save lives?
i thought it was reviews inspire people to write more LOL
reviews save lives?
i thought it was reviews inspire people to write more LOL
2/21/2010 c4 Pounce21
I love this story! I really like the time period and plot that you have going. I bet Edward saves her from getting run over. Please update soon so I can find out!
I love this story! I really like the time period and plot that you have going. I bet Edward saves her from getting run over. Please update soon so I can find out!
2/21/2010 c4 4ElectrikViolin
I loved this chapter. It's Jacob! I knew you'd use him! I love how he fixes wagons, it's just too cute ;) But it's a cliffie! :'( Please update soon!
4ElectrikViolinI loved this chapter. It's Jacob! I knew you'd use him! I love how he fixes wagons, it's just too cute ;) But it's a cliffie! :'( Please update soon!
1/8/2010 c3 4ElectrikViolin
Edwards POV would be great. Especially because I had an interesting thought while reading this story. Since it is taking place in the past I would like to point out that Bella is at an age that she would or should be getting married or is married already. I don't think you should do anything serious because her father doesn't seem like an arranged marriage type of guy but maybe people could start dropping hints. You could add a character that has feelings for Bella. Just someone to make Edward jealous (someone that her father really likes)especially if this person that was an ideal person for her to marry happened to be named Jacob Black and was a good friend...but again most likely this is not the direction that you want your story to go in and I understand that. Please update soon!
4ElectrikViolinEdwards POV would be great. Especially because I had an interesting thought while reading this story. Since it is taking place in the past I would like to point out that Bella is at an age that she would or should be getting married or is married already. I don't think you should do anything serious because her father doesn't seem like an arranged marriage type of guy but maybe people could start dropping hints. You could add a character that has feelings for Bella. Just someone to make Edward jealous (someone that her father really likes)especially if this person that was an ideal person for her to marry happened to be named Jacob Black and was a good friend...but again most likely this is not the direction that you want your story to go in and I understand that. Please update soon!