for Naruto: Broken Mirrors11/12/2012 c12 
2ranma hibiki
laughing so hard my lungs burn!
xD
a most excellent way to win against danzo. not with a bag, but with a pathetic whimper as he is thrown to the wolves..or ibiki
D
keep up the good work!
2ranma hibikilaughing so hard my lungs burn!
xD
a most excellent way to win against danzo. not with a bag, but with a pathetic whimper as he is thrown to the wolves..or ibiki
D
keep up the good work!
11/11/2012 c12 16Shining Pheonix
Definately an interesting snippet, which could go multiple ways if continued. If you don't come up with a continuation of your own, I wouldn't mind taking a go with your blessing.
16Shining PheonixDefinately an interesting snippet, which could go multiple ways if continued. If you don't come up with a continuation of your own, I wouldn't mind taking a go with your blessing.
9/15/2012 c11 alaskan-dracolych
Heh, this is a perfect answer to PL's challenge. Definitely new and original.
Heh, this is a perfect answer to PL's challenge. Definitely new and original.
9/15/2012 c11 3Booze The Klax Knight
damn. that challenge is oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooold. though i dont recal any of the decent ones (the few there were) ever getting finished. One thing that universally pissed me off was that they took like a billion chapters to get anywhere interesting. seems like people just cant grasp that twenty chapters of training and no character development make for poor reading (as if they couldn't just shove massive amounts of romance and fluff there to make it interesting).
3Booze The Klax Knightdamn. that challenge is oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooold. though i dont recal any of the decent ones (the few there were) ever getting finished. One thing that universally pissed me off was that they took like a billion chapters to get anywhere interesting. seems like people just cant grasp that twenty chapters of training and no character development make for poor reading (as if they couldn't just shove massive amounts of romance and fluff there to make it interesting).
7/15/2012 c10 Ben
I don't think i need books anymore what with these groovy short stories going through my head.
I don't think i need books anymore what with these groovy short stories going through my head.
3/3/2011 c8 alaskan-dracolych
Always wanting to do that. Sailor Moon, Power Rangers, at least He-Man had the decency to do it AWAY from his enemies. Yes, I'm ignoring things like Lina Inverse's chanting, because it is plausible that Goury or someone is keeping them off of her while she is whipping out an industrial-size can of whoop-ass. Can't say the same for Sailor Moon.
Always wanting to do that. Sailor Moon, Power Rangers, at least He-Man had the decency to do it AWAY from his enemies. Yes, I'm ignoring things like Lina Inverse's chanting, because it is plausible that Goury or someone is keeping them off of her while she is whipping out an industrial-size can of whoop-ass. Can't say the same for Sailor Moon.
2/24/2011 c5 1AvidReader321
Dear Manatheron,
You good sir... are an evil meanie-head. No other way to put it. You are Satan's manifestation on Earth.
Sifting through the crap that permeates fanfiction.net has become a sadly commonplace practice.
Then you come along. You put up idea, upon idea, upon idea of amazing stories. All of them introduced just enough to get a reader salivating at the possibilities. But they are doomed to stay as introductions.
You have tortured any and all readers of this collection of ideas with the knowledge that they will never see these stories.
You are both beloved for being an amazing author...
and despised for this torturous tease gallery
This is a review informing you of the true pain that has been caused by the knowledge that these fics don't exist.
It is also an ardent plea. Take one of the ideas, any one of them. Develop it into a story and deliver us from our torture.
Sincerely,
Tortured Fanfiction Reader
1AvidReader321Dear Manatheron,
You good sir... are an evil meanie-head. No other way to put it. You are Satan's manifestation on Earth.
Sifting through the crap that permeates fanfiction.net has become a sadly commonplace practice.
Then you come along. You put up idea, upon idea, upon idea of amazing stories. All of them introduced just enough to get a reader salivating at the possibilities. But they are doomed to stay as introductions.
You have tortured any and all readers of this collection of ideas with the knowledge that they will never see these stories.
You are both beloved for being an amazing author...
and despised for this torturous tease gallery
This is a review informing you of the true pain that has been caused by the knowledge that these fics don't exist.
It is also an ardent plea. Take one of the ideas, any one of them. Develop it into a story and deliver us from our torture.
Sincerely,
Tortured Fanfiction Reader
2/3/2010 c5 11A very odd fellow
I'd love to see this one picked up, but it would definitely be a tougher one to pull off effectively. Quite a lengthy storyline, and a unique one at that.
11A very odd fellowI'd love to see this one picked up, but it would definitely be a tougher one to pull off effectively. Quite a lengthy storyline, and a unique one at that.
1/4/2010 c2 1Stryker
Dead Manatheron aka The moron who write this story,
While I enjoy reading this story, I read it for the plot.
Its kind of smooth. But, the only thing that is grating on my nerve is your lack of grammar and vocab knowledge.
CHECK YOUR SPELLING MORON!
Use that spell checker for 2010's sakes!
Do you type using a computer?
Do you use a decent word processor?
Do you even have the money to buy a good software?
MAKE SURE IT HAS A SPELL CHECKER IDIOT!
You know that red line under the word that seems wrong?
That means that the word that you typed was wrongly spelled!
Of all the things. . .
You are a drooling moron.
F .U .C .K .I .N .G M .O .R .O .N
!
DROP DEAD!
Dead Manatheron aka The moron who write this story,
While I enjoy reading this story, I read it for the plot.
Its kind of smooth. But, the only thing that is grating on my nerve is your lack of grammar and vocab knowledge.
CHECK YOUR SPELLING MORON!
Use that spell checker for 2010's sakes!
Do you type using a computer?
Do you use a decent word processor?
Do you even have the money to buy a good software?
MAKE SURE IT HAS A SPELL CHECKER IDIOT!
You know that red line under the word that seems wrong?
That means that the word that you typed was wrongly spelled!
Of all the things. . .
You are a drooling moron.
F .U .C .K .I .N .G M .O .R .O .N
!
DROP DEAD!
12/28/2009 c2 2raging hobo
Good work as always, and it's nice to see you writing again. I had actually just been thinking what a shame it was that you had apparently quit writing a couple days before you started releasing again. I am a little sad to see that you still say "Ikura" instead of "Iruka" but it seems I'm not going to be able to shake you of that. A point of interest though. Ikura is salmon roe. Iruka translates to dolphin. That is all.
RH
2raging hoboGood work as always, and it's nice to see you writing again. I had actually just been thinking what a shame it was that you had apparently quit writing a couple days before you started releasing again. I am a little sad to see that you still say "Ikura" instead of "Iruka" but it seems I'm not going to be able to shake you of that. A point of interest though. Ikura is salmon roe. Iruka translates to dolphin. That is all.
RH