for Groceries12/29/2011 c1 Waterlily
That was amazing! I absolutely loved it!
That was amazing! I absolutely loved it!
4/30/2011 c1 blackjackmunted
Hi, you don't know me and I kinda stumbled across your fic, but I really liked it and would encourage you to write more stories about Mic as a newly turned vampire, I hope you don't mind :)
Hi, you don't know me and I kinda stumbled across your fic, but I really liked it and would encourage you to write more stories about Mic as a newly turned vampire, I hope you don't mind :)
12/27/2009 c1 
11Vampire Reader
You did that so well. Sorry it took me a while to get to it, but so much mail is coming in these days. Poor girl and poor Mick. One thing - she was dressed for a party. With what she had on, she should not have been wearing saddle shoes. Did you see her shoes on the episode. She should have had on clunky closed toe, small heels. I grew up in the saddle shoe era. We wore those with wide A-skirts (preferably poodle), crinolines, and cashmere sweaters, with a neckerchief. Thank you and best wishes for the New Year. VR/Penina
11Vampire ReaderYou did that so well. Sorry it took me a while to get to it, but so much mail is coming in these days. Poor girl and poor Mick. One thing - she was dressed for a party. With what she had on, she should not have been wearing saddle shoes. Did you see her shoes on the episode. She should have had on clunky closed toe, small heels. I grew up in the saddle shoe era. We wore those with wide A-skirts (preferably poodle), crinolines, and cashmere sweaters, with a neckerchief. Thank you and best wishes for the New Year. VR/Penina
12/21/2009 c1 sj61
very good,but very sad!Interesting from the victims POV,and you feel so sorry for Mick,it's not so glamorous to be a vampire!
very good,but very sad!Interesting from the victims POV,and you feel so sorry for Mick,it's not so glamorous to be a vampire!
12/19/2009 c1 46moonjat54
Wow, well done Francis. I love the perspective of the victim and you caught Mick's anguish as he hated what Coraline had made him. And I feel so sorry for Peggy.
46moonjat54Wow, well done Francis. I love the perspective of the victim and you caught Mick's anguish as he hated what Coraline had made him. And I feel so sorry for Peggy.
12/19/2009 c1 32SusieBogle
Another winner! I loved the "lingo" of the first paragraph. Your English - and especially 1950's slang - is awesome. Especially liked the "back seat bingo".
POV of the first victim. Excellent.
SusieB
32SusieBogleAnother winner! I loved the "lingo" of the first paragraph. Your English - and especially 1950's slang - is awesome. Especially liked the "back seat bingo".
POV of the first victim. Excellent.
SusieB