for A Christmas Carol Retold12/22/2009 c1 
2Shrike176
Good story. Sorry for reviewing it a bit late.
Furgal Lucre makes a good Scrooge, its an adaptation that felt right. I was somewhat reminded of a story by FAH3 story called A Christmas Miracle in which Shego played the role of Scrooge.
While I prefered you're last Christmas tale of Hana babysitting, this was a fun piece.
Great work, keep it up!
Happy Holidays!
2Shrike176Good story. Sorry for reviewing it a bit late.
Furgal Lucre makes a good Scrooge, its an adaptation that felt right. I was somewhat reminded of a story by FAH3 story called A Christmas Miracle in which Shego played the role of Scrooge.
While I prefered you're last Christmas tale of Hana babysitting, this was a fun piece.
Great work, keep it up!
Happy Holidays!
12/20/2009 c1 Katsumara
Great start! It's not over? It sure had a nice ending there at the end. Either way, continuing or not, I enjoyed it a ton. Can't wait for more!
Great start! It's not over? It sure had a nice ending there at the end. Either way, continuing or not, I enjoyed it a ton. Can't wait for more!
12/20/2009 c1 30Boris Yeltsin
Interesting how you pulled that off, using Luker as the main character. Did I mention Luker's one annoying guy?
30Boris YeltsinInteresting how you pulled that off, using Luker as the main character. Did I mention Luker's one annoying guy?
12/20/2009 c1 181King in Yellow
In the words of Tom Lehrer:
Christmas time is here, by golly,
Disapproval would be folly,
Deck the halls with hunks of holly,
Fill the cup and don't say "when."
Kill the turkeys, ducks and chickens,
Mix the punch, drag out the Dickens...
I liked the story, but had a bit of trouble with the Martin Smarty scene, somehow I just couldn't see him uttering those words - I'm probably too aware of what it is a parody of to see him as benevolent. (I can see Shego reforming but not Martin Smarty? You may have touched my cynicism nerve.)
KiY
181King in YellowIn the words of Tom Lehrer:
Christmas time is here, by golly,
Disapproval would be folly,
Deck the halls with hunks of holly,
Fill the cup and don't say "when."
Kill the turkeys, ducks and chickens,
Mix the punch, drag out the Dickens...
I liked the story, but had a bit of trouble with the Martin Smarty scene, somehow I just couldn't see him uttering those words - I'm probably too aware of what it is a parody of to see him as benevolent. (I can see Shego reforming but not Martin Smarty? You may have touched my cynicism nerve.)
KiY
12/20/2009 c1 4Comet Moon
AW
Sarah is as sweet as Hanna
Nice one
Meery X-Mas and a Happy New Year
JIm
4Comet MoonAW
Sarah is as sweet as Hanna
Nice one
Meery X-Mas and a Happy New Year
JIm
12/20/2009 c1 4CajunBear73
He has a chance, and so do all others, after all.
Merry Christmas!
CajunBear73
4CajunBear73He has a chance, and so do all others, after all.
Merry Christmas!
CajunBear73
12/20/2009 c1 15screaming phoenix
Nice job with the adaptation of "A Christmas Carol" with some pretty inspired and unusual choices for the various roles.
Frugal Lucre as Scrooge? Priceless. And you did the no-no of referring to the story your are doing a rewrite of; and made it work.
Kudos all around and Merry Christmas!
15screaming phoenixNice job with the adaptation of "A Christmas Carol" with some pretty inspired and unusual choices for the various roles.
Frugal Lucre as Scrooge? Priceless. And you did the no-no of referring to the story your are doing a rewrite of; and made it work.
Kudos all around and Merry Christmas!
12/20/2009 c1 Midgarosormr
Such a wonderful tale, especially with Kim and Ron. :sniff: Got something in my eye...
~
Mike.
Such a wonderful tale, especially with Kim and Ron. :sniff: Got something in my eye...
~
Mike.
12/20/2009 c1 27Sentinel103
Nice Thomas, sometimes all it takes is someone opening their eyes.
Thanks,
Larry (Sentinel 103)
27Sentinel103Nice Thomas, sometimes all it takes is someone opening their eyes.
Thanks,
Larry (Sentinel 103)
12/20/2009 c1 26Captain IT
A nice twist on a old story.And yet seem a bit twisted. The young girl of Christmas future can pass for KT or Anabri. Now I scared myself. I need some coco moo now.
Keep it KP real
Captain IT.
26Captain ITA nice twist on a old story.And yet seem a bit twisted. The young girl of Christmas future can pass for KT or Anabri. Now I scared myself. I need some coco moo now.
Keep it KP real
Captain IT.