
4/13/2011 c22 jemmma97
this is reallly gooooood cant wait for you to update!
please do it sooonn!
this is reallly gooooood cant wait for you to update!
please do it sooonn!
1/13/2011 c22
6GreenEyes555
oooh i love it! short and sweet :)
Please update soon, i can't wait for the next chapter!
Good job
-GreenEyes555
xoxo

oooh i love it! short and sweet :)
Please update soon, i can't wait for the next chapter!
Good job
-GreenEyes555
xoxo
4/15/2010 c17 GreenEyes555
aw how sweet!
i love the song 'how do i live' by faith hill, i basically grew up listening to that song, it's amazing and totally fits in with the chapter.
good luck.
xoxo
aw how sweet!
i love the song 'how do i live' by faith hill, i basically grew up listening to that song, it's amazing and totally fits in with the chapter.
good luck.
xoxo
4/5/2010 c18 hiddencomfort
Sorry for not reviewing recently-my dad had the parental controls set up and it was kind of nightmarish these past weeks for me.I like how you use your dialogue-you never just use "said". Can't wait till the next chapter!
Sorry for not reviewing recently-my dad had the parental controls set up and it was kind of nightmarish these past weeks for me.I like how you use your dialogue-you never just use "said". Can't wait till the next chapter!
3/31/2010 c18
7BatManAndFairyFace
D:
what are the Volturi coming for?
OMYPAUL are they coming for Lin?
you should feel special. I've got an english analysis due tomorrow, and instead of finishing it, so I can get a good grade, I'm reading your story.
if I fail english, I'm blaming you, kay? :)
see you on the flip side,
Rachel 3

D:
what are the Volturi coming for?
OMYPAUL are they coming for Lin?
you should feel special. I've got an english analysis due tomorrow, and instead of finishing it, so I can get a good grade, I'm reading your story.
if I fail english, I'm blaming you, kay? :)
see you on the flip side,
Rachel 3
3/30/2010 c18 ALYSHA AWESOMESAUCE
AWESOME! i absolutley LOVED it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE you have to write MORE REAL soon! THANKS!
AWESOME! i absolutley LOVED it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE you have to write MORE REAL soon! THANKS!
3/20/2010 c17
7BatManAndFairyFace
I do believe that this is amazing ;D
is something big going to happen soon? I re-read the summary, and it said the Volturi are after her? is this just some fluff before something HUGE is revealed?
see you on the flip side,
Rachel 3

I do believe that this is amazing ;D
is something big going to happen soon? I re-read the summary, and it said the Volturi are after her? is this just some fluff before something HUGE is revealed?
see you on the flip side,
Rachel 3
3/13/2010 c14 Fat Turtles Incorporated
That was funny and yet mean with the cliff diving thing. You've done great with this chapter, but I really can't wait for the really exciting parts that have yet to come.
That was funny and yet mean with the cliff diving thing. You've done great with this chapter, but I really can't wait for the really exciting parts that have yet to come.
3/13/2010 c13 Fat Turtles Incorporated
That was good, but it's leaved me with a bit of frustrated confusion. Why won't he either leave her alone or she just accept that he loves her and it's not just cause he imprinted on her? Good job with the story.
That was good, but it's leaved me with a bit of frustrated confusion. Why won't he either leave her alone or she just accept that he loves her and it's not just cause he imprinted on her? Good job with the story.