for A Very Drago Christmas12/12/2010 c1 
7Asian95
wow. she's 10? When I read the beginning I swear she sounds like a 15 year old- at least.
7Asian95wow. she's 10? When I read the beginning I swear she sounds like a 15 year old- at least.
1/9/2010 c1 Durandan
Very sweet and Christmasy story, it makes me quite eager for more of your Small Surprises...
Good work!
Very sweet and Christmasy story, it makes me quite eager for more of your Small Surprises...
Good work!
12/23/2009 c1 4Deaku
Excellent work, it was quite an interesting look into the Drago household during the holiday season.
Nice characterization (you really nailed Team Go I think) it was nice to finally see how they all interact with each other. Also nice to get to know Roza and Demitri a bit better too; especially seeing a softer side to Roza, even if it's just a little bit.
All considered I thought it was a sweet story. Again, excellent work
4DeakuExcellent work, it was quite an interesting look into the Drago household during the holiday season.
Nice characterization (you really nailed Team Go I think) it was nice to finally see how they all interact with each other. Also nice to get to know Roza and Demitri a bit better too; especially seeing a softer side to Roza, even if it's just a little bit.
All considered I thought it was a sweet story. Again, excellent work
12/22/2009 c1 21Alexander - Godslayer
Okay, that’s it! Who are you and what have you done with Zearth!
OK, OK! Jokes aside now, I just GOT to say this is by far the most heartwarming thing I’ve seen you write ever, specially related to Agni! Hell, what am I saying! Specially related to ROZA!
At first, I thought this was gonna be somewhat bittersweet, specially when I noticed that this was happen at the same time of “A Very Possible Christmas”, what with Shego having fun spending Christmas with Kim while she’s stuck with a family she doesn’t like. Though right after that I was having a good laugh at picturing Agni cheering over Snowman Hank, although I did feel a bit sorry for poor Dmitri.
Then comes Agni’s uncles, each one’s relationship is clarified, Roza remains distant and stoic, all the while Agni writes her letter to her mother. But enough pointing out events. Yeah, there was a constant feeling of bitterness all around the chapter, but behind that curtain of sourness, there was really… much joy around there. Agni was shown getting along with Hego and the Wegos, and Roza was shown caring for her family (specifically Agni) in her own way. And one thing I particularly liked was how Hego (And Mego to a point) still don’t give up trying to have a better relationship with their mother. Seems like they know she cares for them deep inside.
Seriously, considering how often you make things sound as dark and unhappy around the Go family, this chapter was really a total surprise, and a pleasant one. I throughout enjoyed it, and I thank you for it.
Aside from that, only critic I could make is that there was a slight excess of exposition if you ask me… then again, it’s so little that it’s barely notable, and it’s well merged with narration that properly describes characters’ traits, so maybe it’s not problem at all.
So overall, thanks for this cute Christmas gift. ^_^
Yours, “Standing on Glory” Alexander/Alexlayer.
21Alexander - GodslayerOkay, that’s it! Who are you and what have you done with Zearth!
OK, OK! Jokes aside now, I just GOT to say this is by far the most heartwarming thing I’ve seen you write ever, specially related to Agni! Hell, what am I saying! Specially related to ROZA!
At first, I thought this was gonna be somewhat bittersweet, specially when I noticed that this was happen at the same time of “A Very Possible Christmas”, what with Shego having fun spending Christmas with Kim while she’s stuck with a family she doesn’t like. Though right after that I was having a good laugh at picturing Agni cheering over Snowman Hank, although I did feel a bit sorry for poor Dmitri.
Then comes Agni’s uncles, each one’s relationship is clarified, Roza remains distant and stoic, all the while Agni writes her letter to her mother. But enough pointing out events. Yeah, there was a constant feeling of bitterness all around the chapter, but behind that curtain of sourness, there was really… much joy around there. Agni was shown getting along with Hego and the Wegos, and Roza was shown caring for her family (specifically Agni) in her own way. And one thing I particularly liked was how Hego (And Mego to a point) still don’t give up trying to have a better relationship with their mother. Seems like they know she cares for them deep inside.
Seriously, considering how often you make things sound as dark and unhappy around the Go family, this chapter was really a total surprise, and a pleasant one. I throughout enjoyed it, and I thank you for it.
Aside from that, only critic I could make is that there was a slight excess of exposition if you ask me… then again, it’s so little that it’s barely notable, and it’s well merged with narration that properly describes characters’ traits, so maybe it’s not problem at all.
So overall, thanks for this cute Christmas gift. ^_^
Yours, “Standing on Glory” Alexander/Alexlayer.
12/22/2009 c1 96Blackbird
Well that was a fun little peek into the Drago's Christmas tradition. It was both kind of heartwarming in it's own...unqiue way but also kind of sad what with Agni having to write the letter to her mother. It was easy to pick up on how she was excited and disappointed in having to send it. Can't be easy to be away from one's parent.
I liked the inclusion of the Christmas ep bits. They definitely helped add a sense of continuty to the whole thing and shows what Agni was up to during the series before she finally ran out to find her mom.
It was also interesting to see Roza's softer side with the present she gave to her granddaughter. Apparently she's NOT completely heartless after all. Just close to her. And her hubsand is definitely...interesting. Now I'm wonder just what brought THOSE two together? Gotta be some strong feelings there.
You captured the attitudes of the Go siblings quite well. I could hear all of their voices clearly in my head when reading their dialogue and their presents all seemed appropirate for them to give. The interactions between them and Agni all seem pretty dead on too. Especially Mego, what a jerk.
Well that's all I can think to say for now. It was a fun little fic and I can't wait to see the rest of Agni's current adventures.
Merry Christmas dude.
96BlackbirdWell that was a fun little peek into the Drago's Christmas tradition. It was both kind of heartwarming in it's own...unqiue way but also kind of sad what with Agni having to write the letter to her mother. It was easy to pick up on how she was excited and disappointed in having to send it. Can't be easy to be away from one's parent.
I liked the inclusion of the Christmas ep bits. They definitely helped add a sense of continuty to the whole thing and shows what Agni was up to during the series before she finally ran out to find her mom.
It was also interesting to see Roza's softer side with the present she gave to her granddaughter. Apparently she's NOT completely heartless after all. Just close to her. And her hubsand is definitely...interesting. Now I'm wonder just what brought THOSE two together? Gotta be some strong feelings there.
You captured the attitudes of the Go siblings quite well. I could hear all of their voices clearly in my head when reading their dialogue and their presents all seemed appropirate for them to give. The interactions between them and Agni all seem pretty dead on too. Especially Mego, what a jerk.
Well that's all I can think to say for now. It was a fun little fic and I can't wait to see the rest of Agni's current adventures.
Merry Christmas dude.