for 1 year, 6 months and four days1/18/2010 c3 
2JadedOne47
Cool, i like this.. please continue.. it seems like it will be very good. :-)
2JadedOne47Cool, i like this.. please continue.. it seems like it will be very good. :-)
12/28/2009 c3 VENZwife
Yeah! He loves Bones, and we all KNOW he loved her before the coma dream! I'm just glad those stupid scans aren't a hindrance anymore! I can't wait to see what he does now!
Yeah! He loves Bones, and we all KNOW he loved her before the coma dream! I'm just glad those stupid scans aren't a hindrance anymore! I can't wait to see what he does now!
12/27/2009 c2 Kate56
Watch your lack of capital letters, it makes the story difficult to read. I think you need to expand the chapters and give them more meat, it will enhance the story so much.
It is a great idea it just needs more substance.
Watch your lack of capital letters, it makes the story difficult to read. I think you need to expand the chapters and give them more meat, it will enhance the story so much.
It is a great idea it just needs more substance.
12/27/2009 c2 VENZwife
Yeah! Booth's feelings are real, and I think he knows it! Yipee! Now what's he gonna do about it? I can't wait to find out! ;-)
Yeah! Booth's feelings are real, and I think he knows it! Yipee! Now what's he gonna do about it? I can't wait to find out! ;-)
12/27/2009 c2 bb-4ever
good chapter, poor booth will sweets help him sort out his feelings? look forward to more soon
good chapter, poor booth will sweets help him sort out his feelings? look forward to more soon
12/27/2009 c2 1ShippyChick
I am looking forward to more of this story. I think you have a good handle on the characters. My only criticism is that Sweets name should be capitalized. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
1ShippyChickI am looking forward to more of this story. I think you have a good handle on the characters. My only criticism is that Sweets name should be capitalized. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
12/22/2009 c1 Kalidris
The intro is very short but also very promising and I'm very curious to read what will happen next. And how it will happen :) I hope you'll update soon :)
The intro is very short but also very promising and I'm very curious to read what will happen next. And how it will happen :) I hope you'll update soon :)
12/22/2009 c1 VENZwife
Yeah! Great intro so far! Like the concept! Can't wait to read the story as it unfolds. :-)
Yeah! Great intro so far! Like the concept! Can't wait to read the story as it unfolds. :-)
12/22/2009 c1 4Serienjunkie 91
I really like the beginning of your story - it sounds really interesting. Now I hope that the first real chapter will have a lot more to read. =)
4Serienjunkie 91I really like the beginning of your story - it sounds really interesting. Now I hope that the first real chapter will have a lot more to read. =)