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3PaleAngel90
Looks promissing, I would like to read more about it, please update soon :)
3PaleAngel90Looks promissing, I would like to read more about it, please update soon :)
2/21/2014 c1 19MarkScyther
Even though I feel that you rushed towards the end a bit, it was still a nice read.
19MarkScytherEven though I feel that you rushed towards the end a bit, it was still a nice read.
12/12/2012 c1 Sora
Please make a second one I want to find out if they'll fall in love
Please make a second one I want to find out if they'll fall in love
7/30/2012 c1 1ehripaint
This was cute and all... But we're talking about Silent Hill, I just can't imagine Pyramid Head crying. It's rather out of character. Alas, the title is "Even Monsters Can Cry" so... I liked it for the OOC fluff - It's rare to find fluff in Silent Hill, haha.
1ehripaintThis was cute and all... But we're talking about Silent Hill, I just can't imagine Pyramid Head crying. It's rather out of character. Alas, the title is "Even Monsters Can Cry" so... I liked it for the OOC fluff - It's rare to find fluff in Silent Hill, haha.
7/22/2012 c1 Silver
Nawww so adorabel
Nawww so adorabel
12/20/2011 c1 Guest
This could have easily have been streatched out into a longer, better, more detailed story. I was highly dissappointed that it was so short and non-descriptive.
This could have easily have been streatched out into a longer, better, more detailed story. I was highly dissappointed that it was so short and non-descriptive.
9/29/2011 c1 Laptop Newbie
That was alright, got most of my PyramidHead/James need fulfilled. I didn't think James would be the one doing so much talking to a "monster." You really use that word too much. I would've also liked more detail into the gore of the room, placement of objects. The positions of the nurses and Pyramid Head using 2ft, 3 ft, it was confusing. I couldn't tell where he was (in front of alley? Near building?) Maybe say, "from a distance," or "getting rapidly closer." Much appreciated. Separate the writing into smaller chunks, the dense blocks of words are difficult to read.
Do keep writing fanfics on this pairing though. It wasn't a particularly quality read but I like reviewing these, aren't "speechless" as of yet. Expand the pairing, and have fun writing!
That was alright, got most of my PyramidHead/James need fulfilled. I didn't think James would be the one doing so much talking to a "monster." You really use that word too much. I would've also liked more detail into the gore of the room, placement of objects. The positions of the nurses and Pyramid Head using 2ft, 3 ft, it was confusing. I couldn't tell where he was (in front of alley? Near building?) Maybe say, "from a distance," or "getting rapidly closer." Much appreciated. Separate the writing into smaller chunks, the dense blocks of words are difficult to read.
Do keep writing fanfics on this pairing though. It wasn't a particularly quality read but I like reviewing these, aren't "speechless" as of yet. Expand the pairing, and have fun writing!
5/27/2011 c1 3Nicole Dollanganger
I think that was... AWESOME :O 3
write more chapters please ? :3 more more. It was so good xD 3
Keep updating. ~ please ;3
-hugs-
~your falling epicness~
3Nicole DollangangerI think that was... AWESOME :O 3
write more chapters please ? :3 more more. It was so good xD 3
Keep updating. ~ please ;3
-hugs-
~your falling epicness~
8/17/2010 c1 Oblivious Henry
(too tired to log in at the moment .)
Anyway, sure it's OOC for PH to cry, but still, it's interesting to read an attempt at making things believable and etc. Hell, I started playing Silent Hill 2 when I got it and got stuck, sadly.
Still, the way this played out in my mind's imagery was VERY interesting.
Also.
Don't let people get you down with 'this is terrible' and all that other stuff. Just toss the flames into Hell (or Silent Hill) and forget all about it.
(too tired to log in at the moment .)
Anyway, sure it's OOC for PH to cry, but still, it's interesting to read an attempt at making things believable and etc. Hell, I started playing Silent Hill 2 when I got it and got stuck, sadly.
Still, the way this played out in my mind's imagery was VERY interesting.
Also.
Don't let people get you down with 'this is terrible' and all that other stuff. Just toss the flames into Hell (or Silent Hill) and forget all about it.
2/27/2010 c1 2EmbertheAngel
...oh! 3 I liked it! Aw James and his mind! I never played the game though! DX Disappointing! I love this though.
2EmbertheAngel...oh! 3 I liked it! Aw James and his mind! I never played the game though! DX Disappointing! I love this though.