11/28/2010 c1 19EvilGeniusBookWorm13
I think you should space it out more. Like, every time someone speaks, your supposed to start a new paragraph
I think you should space it out more. Like, every time someone speaks, your supposed to start a new paragraph
2/21/2010 c1 7SonnyButterflyxx1
you hear that hayden or Jayden or whatever you name is.You to James Conroy!That was so cute and funny!Awesome job!
you hear that hayden or Jayden or whatever you name is.You to James Conroy!That was so cute and funny!Awesome job!
2/15/2010 c1 1Lata
Loved it, so many authers just go too far and make them something very different, not you. It was perfect!
Loved it, so many authers just go too far and make them something very different, not you. It was perfect!