4/6/2018 c1 1stephaneeee
SAYYYYY WHATATTTTTTTTTT?! HP fics too?! YOU ARE SERIOUSLY MY SOUL MATE. Okay, first of all, I know you wrote this almost ten years ago but this is SOOOO good. I love the cadence of it and how it flows from thought to thought. Also, Three Days Grace was such a pinnacle time in my angst phase and I'm so appreciative that you reminded me of it and I bow down, as per usual.

5/2/2010 c1 1Clarisse the Wild
I like how you did this. I like the formatting too, though it is a tad unusual to say the least. I think you should have spent a little more time cleaning up the fic up because there are weird, confusing mistakes you made, probably because you were going very fast.

I like how you portrayed Sirius' character, minus the fact that according to book-canon (which totally pwns movie-canon) he never confused Harry with James, and in your fic he sort of did. Or at least, that's what the 'my little Prongs' line made me think. Harry never said things like 'Seriously, Sirius', either, because Harry's not fun at all.

But despite the minor faults, I totally like how you did this. It didn't make me want to cry, but it made me think a lot about the relationship between Sirius and James. I think I might even come back to reread this a few times, I liked it so much. Good job!

1/22/2010 c1 11owanaminapotter
What the heck were you talking about, this is great! Keep writing!

12/24/2009 c1 4vampire-luver101
hmm i like it :D