for Gomu Gomu no Shinobi: Mugiwara no Naruto10/29/2024 c5 Guest
what happens next?
what happens next?
3/11/2023 c1 Guest
Oh fuck you, why would he need to take the 8 trigram attack WHEN HE CAN EASILY FUCKING DODGE IT YOU IDIOT
Oh fuck you, why would he need to take the 8 trigram attack WHEN HE CAN EASILY FUCKING DODGE IT YOU IDIOT
2/26/2023 c1 El Vigilante del
Hola, La última vez que leí este fanfic, lo decidí adaptar a formato audio sin tu consentimiento. Así qué... Te pido el favor de que me des el permiso para pasar el fanfic a youtube, dandote creditos.
Hola, La última vez que leí este fanfic, lo decidí adaptar a formato audio sin tu consentimiento. Así qué... Te pido el favor de que me des el permiso para pasar el fanfic a youtube, dandote creditos.
3/24/2022 c3 Guest
you do know only SEA
you do know only SEA
5/21/2021 c1 
5iacopo.passerini
Naruto adesso sarà imprevedibile e spero che Sasuke e kakashi paghino con la vita!
5iacopo.passeriniNaruto adesso sarà imprevedibile e spero che Sasuke e kakashi paghino con la vita!
4/16/2021 c1 19Jabari the Goat Sage
Naruto is supposed to be a shinobi, why is he giving away his secrets like this?
19Jabari the Goat SageNaruto is supposed to be a shinobi, why is he giving away his secrets like this?
8/20/2020 c1 Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon
they're all surprised but half of them could do that to kaiten at gennin level
they're all surprised but half of them could do that to kaiten at gennin level
4/26/2019 c1 nikki nein
jiraiya would have a hell of a time on the isle of women, so would Kakashi, ebisu, and so would seritobi
jiraiya would have a hell of a time on the isle of women, so would Kakashi, ebisu, and so would seritobi
1/6/2018 c5 Guest
I wish if can continue this story. Thank you
I wish if can continue this story. Thank you
12/6/2017 c5 Borello
this story is really interesting. why you stop the story?
this story is really interesting. why you stop the story?
12/1/2017 c5 Justbrowsingthestories
Every once in awhile I'll come across an old story that's popular but is so unbelievably bad that I don't understand how it got there, this is one of them.
Firstly Naruto is so unbelievably annoying telling people left and right about the devil fruits in an entire fucking stadium full of people, they DON'T need to know the origins or even of the previous existence of the fruits or that the whole history is written in his shitty little book.
Secondly I'm sick of reading him saying oh 50% of my power, 60% of my power. Like shit stop acting so pretentious, especially after you cry like a baby when you're about to get crushed by the sand. Honestly how can you believe he wouldn't know physical attacks wouldn't harm him if he knows how strong he is? Especially if it's strong enough to fight kages etc, it's pathetic nonsense.
Third he WOULDN'T get affected by water jutsu, like seriously it isn't sea water. I'm glad this story didn't go further because every thing about it was horrible, I don't know why I tortured myself reading it.
Basically to anyone who might want to read this, it doesn't hold up. It was popular in 2010 I suppose but it's sickening how he acts. Giving out crucial information left and right, saying the people who legitimately (in this shitty fic) tortured him are his precious people that are good people? among many other problems, make this garbage.
Every once in awhile I'll come across an old story that's popular but is so unbelievably bad that I don't understand how it got there, this is one of them.
Firstly Naruto is so unbelievably annoying telling people left and right about the devil fruits in an entire fucking stadium full of people, they DON'T need to know the origins or even of the previous existence of the fruits or that the whole history is written in his shitty little book.
Secondly I'm sick of reading him saying oh 50% of my power, 60% of my power. Like shit stop acting so pretentious, especially after you cry like a baby when you're about to get crushed by the sand. Honestly how can you believe he wouldn't know physical attacks wouldn't harm him if he knows how strong he is? Especially if it's strong enough to fight kages etc, it's pathetic nonsense.
Third he WOULDN'T get affected by water jutsu, like seriously it isn't sea water. I'm glad this story didn't go further because every thing about it was horrible, I don't know why I tortured myself reading it.
Basically to anyone who might want to read this, it doesn't hold up. It was popular in 2010 I suppose but it's sickening how he acts. Giving out crucial information left and right, saying the people who legitimately (in this shitty fic) tortured him are his precious people that are good people? among many other problems, make this garbage.