for The Web One Weaves7/4/2010 c1 Koi Queen
It was well written, the dialog was good, and the pace was even. It is not the "BEST STORY EVER!" or any other things I might yell in a sugar rush, but it certainly was worth the read and you have a lot of talent. I may just have to take a look at some of your other works.
It was well written, the dialog was good, and the pace was even. It is not the "BEST STORY EVER!" or any other things I might yell in a sugar rush, but it certainly was worth the read and you have a lot of talent. I may just have to take a look at some of your other works.
6/28/2010 c1 sweetgirl21
so far i think its really good, but i would like if you continued the story. who knows maybe peter and mary jane fall in love with each other, just an idea.
so far i think its really good, but i would like if you continued the story. who knows maybe peter and mary jane fall in love with each other, just an idea.
2/4/2010 c1 JC
Great story.
I hope ther will be a season3.
Any ideas for Season3,s Villains?
Do you think ther will be all New villains?
Great story.
I hope ther will be a season3.
Any ideas for Season3,s Villains?
Do you think ther will be all New villains?
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