7/13/2010 c2 Dakota
I like it! It's really good! I haven't read something like this before! :) I totally going to keep reading this!
I like it! It's really good! I haven't read something like this before! :) I totally going to keep reading this!
7/2/2010 c20 laurie
i loved it! she found edward in the end! yay! amazingly stuctured and beautifully wrote! u got talant girl!
i loved it! she found edward in the end! yay! amazingly stuctured and beautifully wrote! u got talant girl!
7/2/2010 c20 11DreamingOfParadise
Last chapter? Oh nooo!
It was a really great end though, and I've really enjoyed this story! The last chapter was particularly romantic, something you can never go wrong with!
Thanks for writing this and I look forward to more in the future!
Becky :)
Last chapter? Oh nooo!
It was a really great end though, and I've really enjoyed this story! The last chapter was particularly romantic, something you can never go wrong with!
Thanks for writing this and I look forward to more in the future!
Becky :)
7/1/2010 c20 4Fiery Horse Fanatic
I loved your story! I LOVE ALICExJASPER STORIES! Is there going to be a sequel to this one? If there is, I can't wait to read it!
I loved your story! I LOVE ALICExJASPER STORIES! Is there going to be a sequel to this one? If there is, I can't wait to read it!
5/7/2010 c19 4Awesome-Vampire-Pixie
Aww... the end of the chapter was sweet. I liked Alice's little speech. :)
Aww... the end of the chapter was sweet. I liked Alice's little speech. :)
5/6/2010 c19 11DreamingOfParadise
Don't worry about updating as often - I completely understand what you're going through and it's best to just relax and put the school stuff first :) Good luck!
Brilliant chapter, though! I've really missed this story :P Thanks for your review for mine as well! Appreciated, as always!
Becky :)
Don't worry about updating as often - I completely understand what you're going through and it's best to just relax and put the school stuff first :) Good luck!
Brilliant chapter, though! I've really missed this story :P Thanks for your review for mine as well! Appreciated, as always!
Becky :)
4/9/2010 c18 DreamingOfParadise
Wow... I think that was definitely your best chapter yet!
It was so intense! The part where Jasper was hit with the bat was horrible, and I was so glad when he woke up! Also, during this chapter, I found myself really liking the Edward you've created :) He's so caring and obviously really looks out for Alice.
Great update and I can't wait for the next one!
Becky :)
Wow... I think that was definitely your best chapter yet!
It was so intense! The part where Jasper was hit with the bat was horrible, and I was so glad when he woke up! Also, during this chapter, I found myself really liking the Edward you've created :) He's so caring and obviously really looks out for Alice.
Great update and I can't wait for the next one!
Becky :)
4/8/2010 c18 xICanSeeYoux
r u updating and can you reveiw my story?
r u updating and can you reveiw my story?