for Hate?6/23/2010 c11 
1Princessoffun
PLease update i love your storie its so amazing i love lucius's arrogarance and antanasia's fiestiness
1PrincessoffunPLease update i love your storie its so amazing i love lucius's arrogarance and antanasia's fiestiness
6/7/2010 c11 Someone
GAHHHH! UPDATTTTTE! PLEAAAAAAAASE! I BEGITH OF THEEEE!
GAHHHH! UPDATTTTTE! PLEAAAAAAAASE! I BEGITH OF THEEEE!
5/26/2010 c11 Michelleisawesome
Love love love ur story! Plzzzz keep writing! Pretty plz update soon!
Love love love ur story! Plzzzz keep writing! Pretty plz update soon!
5/26/2010 c11 jezz
i just love this story cant wait for the next update but can you make it longer
i just love this story cant wait for the next update but can you make it longer
5/22/2010 c11 1JessyLeighann
Its good. I had to go back and reread since i couldn't remeber what had happened. I wish you would have longer chapters, but i know it can be hard to write a long chapter, specaily if things don't break evenly. lol. Hope to read more soon
1JessyLeighannIts good. I had to go back and reread since i couldn't remeber what had happened. I wish you would have longer chapters, but i know it can be hard to write a long chapter, specaily if things don't break evenly. lol. Hope to read more soon
5/3/2010 c9 2LightSeeker6996
It feels to me that your characters are in fact bipolar. I know when i write, my charaters can do that two. It usually has to do with how i feel when i'm writing. If i'm in a bad mood my characters are too, if i'm in a great mood my characters are too.
2LightSeeker6996It feels to me that your characters are in fact bipolar. I know when i write, my charaters can do that two. It usually has to do with how i feel when i'm writing. If i'm in a bad mood my characters are too, if i'm in a great mood my characters are too.
5/2/2010 c5 Mary
keep up with the two POVs but you need to fix Antanasia's speech, She sounds like and American teenager, if you want her to be a Romanian princess she must sound as if she has been trained in Romanian royal etiquette and deportment. Lucius's assault in the first chapter was too sudden, any royal woman would never allow her person to be assaulted like that she should have slapped him or at the very least threatened him. She also needs to feel trapped so far she has too much freedom to do as she pleases, what's to stop her from running away, pact be damned. She has no motive and Lucius has no hold over her. Tell a story not a bunch of vignettes, but you have a good basic premise; she hates him and they are forced to marry. Also decide whether Lucius is horny, attracted to her, or feels honor-bound to marry her because I'm mostly getting a "I need to get laid" vibe from him and that's not how he is in the original
keep up with the two POVs but you need to fix Antanasia's speech, She sounds like and American teenager, if you want her to be a Romanian princess she must sound as if she has been trained in Romanian royal etiquette and deportment. Lucius's assault in the first chapter was too sudden, any royal woman would never allow her person to be assaulted like that she should have slapped him or at the very least threatened him. She also needs to feel trapped so far she has too much freedom to do as she pleases, what's to stop her from running away, pact be damned. She has no motive and Lucius has no hold over her. Tell a story not a bunch of vignettes, but you have a good basic premise; she hates him and they are forced to marry. Also decide whether Lucius is horny, attracted to her, or feels honor-bound to marry her because I'm mostly getting a "I need to get laid" vibe from him and that's not how he is in the original
4/30/2010 c10 Dani
PLZ UPDATE! DON'T LIVE US LIKE THIS!
PLZ UPDATE! DON'T LIVE US LIKE THIS!